m-NOUN [2014-02-14 22:33:38 +0000 UTC]
Though I haven’t the premium membership for a critique I enjoy the fact that you don’t think its good enough. I will take your suggestion and praise the work a bit while giving advice as I feel the peace is excellent in its composure while not in need of many critiques the knowledge of the piece is yours so I’ll take a stab at it.
The light source is an original concept and your signature for the work so that is good to be admired where the source is unclear whether it be heavenly or a part in the clouds that are present thankfully, maybe in such a bright landscape there would be a flair or halo at the source giving it more realism for if you take a pic like that there would be one. The transition between rock and field at the mid left seems a little cut in where the mid right looks natural possibly because of the difference in lighting caused by your beam of light it just looks blended better on the right. I like that you have detail in the foreground with the up close grasses you may consider putting another element of interest in the composition where mystery may make it a bit more interesting in the future like you did in the previous composition with the sail ship maybe an animal that blends nicely with the undergrowth only to be noticed by those truly interested in your work. Create faces that look present naturally in the rocks or cloud something to draw more interest to those who may only see sky, rock, and brush haven’t used their inner eye yet and want to explore what may be there but are unsure.
Nice work and I hope I’ve helped a bit otherwise it is your creation and it is always up to you to do as you may with or without change it is still an impressive piece.
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m-NOUN In reply to AnthonyShea [2014-02-16 00:57:04 +0000 UTC]
I keep a copy of my text for when I’m down I impress myself with all the complements I write and make myself feel better while I wonder how I could have composed so much by translating thought into words. Your responses are quite good too, the most I've ever gotten from a single person. Most just say thanks or nothing but for those who put such effort into their work then responses I feel like I have to catch up and concentrate on responses instead of their work. Either way is good for me I still get to write.
Is there any work you want me to look at or should I just explore your page again or many times to find the ones you’re talking about in the future.
Of course i could watch but that's something i don't do much since i like to explore new from other peoples works whenever i'm in chat that's why i seem so silent when i'm in there
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