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auto5k [2017-02-24 18:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

I'm not going to say much because there is not much to say (and its my first critique that I write ).
There is Good and there is bad.
I like how you do the shadows and the lightnings but its not perfect : there are visible strokes all over the body ,you should really soften them, same for the mane and tail.
I also like the head ,Its nicely drawn, the eyes are good and the expression is a good point.
ONE major problem to the drawing I something that I see a lot on your drawing, its the anatomy, Maybe Its the way you like to do it,maybe its your style, but there are a lot of flawn ,the neck and the body are kinda too long a not properly formed and the legs are good but could be better.
Overall ,Its a really nice drawing but It could be way better I you'd work on your Shadowing, Coloring (visible brush strokes), and Anatomy

ps ( I apologize for any spell mistakes ,English isn't my base language)

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0Swifttz0 [2017-02-24 16:58:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow you did a amazing job drawing my oc Thansk ^^ and such a surprise hehe ^^,, but still looks amazing X3 and I shall give you a watch for this ^^

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