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PonderHope In reply to annsquare [2012-12-25 06:26:33 +0000 UTC]
No problem! You're incredible!
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Keko-Illustrations [2012-09-12 01:58:38 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
My first thoughts on this is "Wow! It's absolutely stunning!"
Looking deeper though, what I actually find most appealing about this artwork is the fantastic colour scheme, the technique used and the water crashing against the rocks. It's so well executed that I can almost hear the sound of water from just looking at it. I especially like the way the water is clearly flowing in a direction past the boy. I really like the subtle warm and cool colours you have put together. The warm orange in the sky is especially beautiful and not to overpowering at the same time.
Nitpicking this (since this is a critique) I couldn't help but feel it were missing a little more of the enchanting scenery. I would have just liked this work to be a little more on the landscape orientation than portrait. Looking at it, my eye first lands on the boy and his red pants against the blues, and then travels up toward the horizon, and then travels to the left. Then I sort of felt like I didn't know where to go next and it sort of led me out of the page.
Another thing I really liked about this piece is that you don't necessarily see everything upon first glance. I didn't see the birds near the mountains on the top left there, nor did I see that the boy was holding a boat. The boat then sort of tells me a story in that he wants to sail his boat but the water is a little too rough.
The boy, as I mentioned before, is great to lead the eye into the scene, but I do feel he is slightly disconnected from the world around him. I think it is perhaps the white line around him, especially around his ankles, that sort of makes him come forward from the rock that he is standing on.
Overall, this is a very good artwork and you should definitely be proud of it. From a distance, I feel it suffers a little, but when looking at it closer it is much better. Keep up the great work!
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annsquare In reply to Keko-Illustrations [2012-09-12 05:40:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the compliments and very thoughtful critique! I'll put my responses here if it's not too much to read:
Your feeling about how the picture leads you is a very valuable opinion for me. I only planned the curved shoreline on the left leading to the lighthouse, but I can see now that the lead needs to end up somewhere, maybe back to the boy.
Ah yes, and the white outline. On hindsight it was my attempt to bring more focus to the boy - the original lines were in pencil, and since I felt I failed to create enough contrast between his skintone and the white waves, I resorted to outlining in white, a technique used much more professionally (but sparingly) in manga. Again, your feeling is very true, and I appreciate the feedback.
Why, in your opinion, do you think it "suffers a little" when viewed from a distance?
Thanks again for such wonderful critique!
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annsquare In reply to NaesCadence [2012-08-16 22:32:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Your point about the boy cut-out is quite valid, thanks for pointing it out!
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drawitout [2013-04-03 00:51:29 +0000 UTC]
How absolutely stunning! You are a master of traditional art.
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WikipediaPlus [2012-10-29 10:17:07 +0000 UTC]
Amazingly good. I suggested it for a DD. Hope this gets a DD. It's deserving. I'll also feature this in my group. I'll send you the
invitation too.
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eastcorkpainter [2012-10-26 10:48:39 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful artistic effects all round, particularly around the sea that's really nice. My only small criticism would be the figure in the foreground, he looks a bit stuck into the painting? Great work!
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annsquare In reply to eastcorkpainter [2012-10-26 15:21:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
By "stuck into the painting" do you mean he looks like a cut-out, that's out of place? A few others have told me the same, and I do see that as a big problem. But thanks for pointing it out! I love critiques <3
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eastcorkpainter In reply to annsquare [2012-10-26 20:25:45 +0000 UTC]
Yep that's what I meant. It's not a big deal just something I noticed and I'm glad you like critiques!
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Charlene-Art [2012-09-10 07:25:47 +0000 UTC]
The colours and the textures here just look gorgeous.
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aruarian-dancer [2012-08-26 18:27:26 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations, YAC 2012 finalist!
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vicse [2012-08-18 06:28:58 +0000 UTC]
damnnn
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vicse In reply to annsquare [2012-08-18 06:52:57 +0000 UTC]
lol that was like a good damnnnnn like you know the sound you make when u see something awesome....yea ok im weird.....what ever lol
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vicse In reply to annsquare [2012-08-19 03:26:12 +0000 UTC]
haha ok jut making sure i dont wana sound like a jerk xD
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vicse In reply to annsquare [2012-08-19 06:27:15 +0000 UTC]
ok good lol that would be no bueno
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diamondkitty1979 [2012-08-14 15:49:45 +0000 UTC]
Amazing work! I love the ocean's roughness. It makes me wonder if that little guy is excited or scared.
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haakon95 [2012-08-10 07:40:21 +0000 UTC]
really awsome painting!
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