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Published: 2016-04-04 00:11:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 790; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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When Blythe was on a camping trip with her family. She finally learned what hell truly meant when she and her family met Achilles Tendon.Related content
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That's quite a terrifying sight to behold.
I personally like snakes, but if I ever came across one that was of gigantic proportions, had crimson patches and stripes and freaking six eyes, I'd probably be terrified as well.
Very good detailing with both the snake and young lady Blythe, though the blue background doesn't seem to quite fit in. Nevertheless, this deviation expresses fear in an excellent way.
Nice job, fellow deviant!
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Thank you 
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I feel very attracted to this piece as it well desighed to my liking.
it is quite detailed and properly proputioned.
the contrast is very fitting and apealling to the eyes.
playing on the diffrent compistion gives it it's own desigh.
the only dissmerit I see is the amorphic desigh of the snake that works in favor of itself in this piece giving an beyond natural feeling to the creation.
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Thank you
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I love seeing traditional drawings, so this caught my eye. You've got a good color scheme on Blythe, the skin tone is good and her hair is very dark, and her warmer tones help her stand out against the blue tent. One thing I might have done is have her hugging her knees, since her jeans are a little too similar to the tent's color.
Another thing about Blythe's design is that her eyes are too close together. The rule of thumb for drawing eyes is to sketch the circle of a third eye in between to check how far apart they should be.
It's really good how you have these pops of warm color with Blythe and the snake, and the sky is a very dramatic color. However, with the sky being so red, the light hitting the tent would probably give it a red tint. The coloring inside the tent doesn't really match the environment. And even if it was just normal afternoon rather than this red sunset, the tent would give Blythe and the parts of the snake inside it a blue tint.
Another thing about the sky is that while separately it and the snake are very dramatically colored, the snake gets a little lost against it with the red patches on the skin.
Also, the inside of the tent is a little confusing. If that's the wall of the tent behind her, where is the zip?
Anyway, this is a pretty good illustration, but there's some room for improvement.
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Thank you for the advice. It is really helpful
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Very nice, i love the idea only thing that i have to say is that the background looks painted. and it make it look like it was drawn by two different people.
other then that i really like the snakes 6 eyes. I love the pure scared facial expression on the female its been a while since ive seen a drawing with this much expression in it.
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Thank you!! I really appreciate the compliment
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Thank you
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Any time your art is always awesome.
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Very nicely drawn, nice shading and love the Snake, I would have fainted!! Thanks for submitting to the group, we appreciate your hard work with your art!!
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Thank you I really appreciate it
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You are very welcome!
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Yeah, no kidding
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mmhmm
mikuru: *grabs her* you and I have a lot to talk about..
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Blythe: like what?"
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mikuru: about snake demons.
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Blythe: you've met demons too?"
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mikuru: you have no idea..in fact i'm half of one...
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Blythe: starts backing away* you're a what?!"
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mikuru: i'm half of a demon, and human, but i don't wanna be a demon you can relax
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Blythe: how in the hell can I relax when you're still one of them! I've seen what those bastards have done. They killed my family and kidnapped me and put me through a world of hell"
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Mikuru: I'm not like that
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Blythe: why should I trust you?"
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Mikuru: because I'm going to make sure that nothing happened
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Blythe: how can I trust you?"
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mikuru: *blocks her from a demon*
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Blythe: blinks*
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demon: *hisses*
Mikuru: believe me now?
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Blythe: how...how did you do that?"
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Mikuru: i'm a ninja...
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blythe: well... I'm a disciple"
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Mikuru: can you trust me now?
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Blythe: no...at least not yet... My master taught me it's best not to trust people, but I'm not scared of you anymore"
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Mikuru: sometimes you have to just to get close to your enemies or when you need help.
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Blythe: chuckles* you kind of sound like the old crow"
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Mikuru: I'm 22! I'm not that old
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Blythe: yeah, well I'm 15 but should be 36"
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mikuru: you're what?!?!?
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Blythe: yeah I've been fighting demons for 21 years in the human world but in the Demonata I've been doing for about eh.. 3 years I think now"
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mikuru: oh okay, so bascially a au in away?
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Blythe: yeah, I suppose"
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mikuru: and i'm the daughter death...and my dad is a jerk.
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yeah there pretty good
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i will put it on the list
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