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Published: 2018-11-17 02:40:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 25114; Favourites: 226; Downloads: 0
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www.deviantart.com/aniitaruiz/… <--P N-->The scripts were written by: risuchan23 and the drawings were made by me: AniiTaRuiz
Autores de AU de Undertale:
- Undertale - toby_Fox
- DreamTale - JokuBlog
- UnderFell - desconocido/ unknown
- EchoTale - yoralim
- Mad gaster - MEGA1126
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So what I have read about the situation, apparently the translator quit because of rude people, understandable, hope someone new comes in or atleast the rude people stop being rude about grammar....
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the translater quit because people being rude about "bad" grammar
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Just to annoy those people they should use Google translate for the next ten slides
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Oh that’s sad it was a really exciting comic I loved it to
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we all do but it's karma to the rude people.
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Hey Anii, do you need any permission from the creators of those AUs to draw this amazing comic?
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Omg this is really good and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next in the story!!
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I just discovered this series recently (yesterday, exactly) and, boy, how happy I am that it's actually already going this far. With Deltarune released, lots of people will come back to Undertale fandom and found your story, so don't give up! It's okay to take your time, though.
SO! The story concept is quite decent and I (and lots of people as well, I'm sure) find it interesting to combine some of the AUs (I understand if you can't include all because God-knows-how-many-AUs-there-are). We can see how different and yet how same all of these Sanses. Recent chapter with Mad Gaster, DreamTale charas, EchoTale charas, and Underfell charas (Save Flowey, god darn it) is quite interesting as well! I really like that twist from Geno too, hoping to see another plot twist (they're the best!). You are so good at drawing poses, gestures, and... point of view (I dunno what it is called). We are waiting for next arc!
Although I said you're good at drawing gestures, for action scene ones maybe you could practice a bit more? It's okay, you can practice every time you publish too, I'm sure later drawings/chapters will be great! Also, some people maybe already pointing this out, but maybe you could use a helper as your translator? Besides Google translate, I mean. Some feelings that you want to deliver to readers won't be delivered completely if the media/way isn't executed properly.
Just a question (more like suggestion, huehehehe), will you add Dancetale and Negatale as well? It would be interesting to see other Sanses fighting intensely with their bones, blasters, hands, and portals, while Dance!Sans was fighting while doing hip-hop and jumped--dodged--all the attacks (come on, he's a dancer. His agility must be the highest, his stamina would be higher than some other Sanses as well, even though his attack is not as strong as others. He could free the Frisks while other Sanses were fighting in a minute, maybe?). And, ooooh, Nega!Sans would be so great in here too. Besides seeing his personality (which will be quite interesting, because he's so different from the usual lucky-go-around or murderous Sanses), it would be badass to see his "Super Saiyan form" when Error and others took away his Frisk (boy, the POWER). I don't know its current owner, though.
I'm no artist, though. I'm just an amateur writer who just discovered DeviantArt, so you can ignore my critics and suggestions. Also, sorry this became a letter instead than a comment. Hope you can still understand what I wrote.
Keep practicing! Don't forget to be happy!
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Welp, okay, sorry, I just read your recent journal. I apologize that I (us? The whole fandom?) offended your friend who went through all of that to translate your comic from Spanish to English. Personally I did not know the situation of this fandom. If you guys won't continue the comic, it's fine! You guys deserved the peace.
To risuchan23, if you're reading this, thank you for the fabulous plot and story! I already said that the plot is quite decent, right? Keep writing or whatever makes you happy. I'm really happy to be able to read one of your works here.
Just do what makes you happy, guys!
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Archer : "Hey when you guys are done with the humans can I have their Souls?"
Me : *Looks at Archer.* "...Really?"
Archer : "Worth a shot."
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Nah, actually one of my Undertale OC's.
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I missed up . who's the good guy and who's the bad guy?
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Geno was secretly good and red was bad. I am sure about geno, not about red
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Yeah but I'm wondering about edgy
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Edgy is bad, Geno is good but pretending to be bad for a secret plan (I also could have just said Geno is secretly good XT)
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Glad to see this comic is still going, but have you considered getting someone who knows just a lil' bit more english? I think people would enjoy it more with not as many grammar mistakes. I appreciate that you are taking the time to translate it for people though!
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Cause in this story, he hates Frisk even though in actual Underfell he cares about Frisk XD This Story has so many confusing things that aren’t actually true, like how Core!Frisk got captured but I’m just oofing with it as I continue reading XD
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because he is from underfell...dah...
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Underfell Sans is suppose to be good too... dahh
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Cuidado Sans (fell) que Flowey se re para de manos.
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Why do I see you and someone else ALwAYS IN EVERY SINGLE AU I GO TO!? XDDDDDD (rd is helping them because that’s how the story was written XP)
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well i wash a lot of peple that do undertale aus
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