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Published: 2012-03-31 20:18:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 6271; Favourites: 328; Downloads: 555
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Description Your phone bills are smaller now,
with no long distance calls to make,

and your car insurance reduced to reflect lower mileage
and all those journeys not made, those roads not taken,
those lanes that you know like the back of your hand -

Left, right, straight ahead, right, right -

are no longer driven.  You did not see the bluebells wake
and spring burst forth in the countryside,
did not see the snow on the fields, cold horses in their  
quilted coats pawing, nibbling, pawing.

Christmas stamps still tucked in your wallet,
unused,
and fountain pens dried up next to watermarked
John Lewis writing paper
with no letters left to write.

Weekends stretch out, lunchbreak is a blank and you have more time


but you have less.
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Comments: 65

Wooltree [2012-06-21 08:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Very sad yet beautiful... Congrats on the DD!

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osagelady In reply to ??? [2012-06-21 07:13:54 +0000 UTC]

So very touching...

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BellaBugia In reply to ??? [2012-04-14 08:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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Anarkhos In reply to BellaBugia [2012-04-18 22:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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sunshinegypsy [2012-04-03 02:28:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh my. This is quite lovely and makes me ache.

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Anarkhos In reply to sunshinegypsy [2012-04-18 22:05:23 +0000 UTC]

<3

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Abracadabrante [2012-04-01 04:01:06 +0000 UTC]

Lovely. The details here are laid out so beautifully. It has a rhythm that makes you want to read it aloud.
I especially love the part about the stamps.
However, I find the third line of the poem a bit awkward and wordy.
Fantastic work, it's beautiful.

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Anarkhos In reply to Abracadabrante [2012-04-18 22:05:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Pereyga In reply to ??? [2012-03-31 21:31:02 +0000 UTC]

I love it, it's really beautiful

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Anarkhos In reply to Pereyga [2012-04-18 22:05:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Pereyga In reply to Anarkhos [2012-04-19 13:47:22 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome :3

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Morgana-Jones [2012-03-31 21:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh I love this :')

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Anarkhos In reply to Morgana-Jones [2012-04-18 22:05:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Morgana-Jones In reply to Anarkhos [2012-04-19 19:12:45 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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