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Anarkhos — Mon Coeur S'Ouvre A Ta Voix
Published: 2012-09-24 18:26:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 561; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 5
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Description You have broken my heart.
You said "don't go; don't love me
and leave me" and pulled me close
to sleep
and my insides were like melting caramel
and I stayed.

I expect nothing of you now;
admit only in the pining early hours that I
want need crave
you still -
and suppressed;
my vivid dreams remind me why oh why it is you

and only you that haunts me.  

And when I hear your voice,
your foreign accent familiar as home,
calling me back across the years in dreams
I do not wish for freedom but to step through time
to you.  
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Comments: 10

vespera [2012-10-03 21:52:01 +0000 UTC]

I also was expecting more French in this with the title.

"my vivid dreams remind me why oh why it is you" - I feel like there should be some sort of punctuation between "me" and "why" or maybe italics for the second half?


The last sentence, ah. Lovely!

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HinPink [2012-09-26 00:26:30 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome

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Anarkhos In reply to HinPink [2012-09-26 21:44:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Vyrerus [2012-09-24 21:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, it's simply put but kind of profound. I connect.

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Anarkhos In reply to Vyrerus [2012-09-26 21:44:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Amberous [2012-09-24 18:46:57 +0000 UTC]

I understand that feeling could you translate the title for me?

and the ending was beautiful.

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Anarkhos In reply to Amberous [2012-09-24 20:35:33 +0000 UTC]

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and thank you!

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Apocapus [2012-09-24 18:39:53 +0000 UTC]

With the title, I expected a more diverse vocabulary. Doesn't seem like it fits.
That aside, the emotions do seem tender and longing.

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Anarkhos In reply to Apocapus [2012-09-24 20:36:05 +0000 UTC]

The whole poem in french? Or more diverse in English?

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Apocapus In reply to Anarkhos [2012-09-24 22:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Well, incorporating some French words with English or trying some different vocabulary words in order to accentuate the feel of it. Though it's up to you, I was only giving my opinion.

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