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Narodenia In reply to Alpha-Element [2013-06-09 17:42:53 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome, this would be perfect as a wallpaper. Im guessing you made it big for that reason?
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pachesthedog [2013-06-09 02:37:24 +0000 UTC]
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It really is just a lovely peice of work, I have two things I think could be improved. The rings just kind of....stop. It looks like you tried to make it fade off, which is lovely, but it immedietly cuts to the faded ring. I would make it a slow fade instead of a cut off. Speaking of the area around the rings, that brings me to my second idea. There is a second perfectly straight light flare right through the faded ring, which I think looks strange. I don't know your intention, so if everything I'm saying was on purpose, then YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB! I really hope this doesn't offend you in any way, or make you feel like your work is not good, because it is amazing. Wonderful art, and I hope I could help!
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Alpha-Element In reply to pachesthedog [2013-06-09 13:12:28 +0000 UTC]
thank you for writing this critique! i fixed the errors you had pointed out in the image and reuploaded it to deviantart. so thank you.
i will say that the elements you pointed out were intentional, but you are not completely wrong in bringing them up. i'll start with the line from the flare, i wanted to leave it in because for some reason, it felt like it fit in. but it came out too bright and i forgot to fix that, so i went back and fixed it.
as for the rings, it was also intentional, but they did cut off too sharpely as you mentioned, so i went back and smoothed them out somewhat.
so again, thank you.
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StarkitecktDesigns [2016-02-20 20:17:52 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for uploading it in high resolution! Nice texture work on the planets!Β
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H0opss [2015-06-14 01:38:19 +0000 UTC]
All your works are splendid, continue i like so much...
Have a good day
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ricky312 [2015-01-22 22:59:33 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful stuff IΒ Β like it because your space scenes don't have spaceships clogging it up. what program do you use? Photoshop?
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Alpha-Element In reply to ricky312 [2015-01-31 21:32:46 +0000 UTC]
thank you, i'm glad you like it. and yes i use photoshop cs5.
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FreeMind93 [2014-04-21 07:35:09 +0000 UTC]
Good Job!!
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Skypho98 [2013-07-06 17:52:01 +0000 UTC]
Masterpiece!
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pogona2009 [2013-06-30 22:55:48 +0000 UTC]
hey, great work, love the mood, and also the texture of the gas planet.
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Dagohbert [2013-06-15 07:31:20 +0000 UTC]
If there would be no Universe, it should be you to create one
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Drydareelin [2013-06-10 12:49:54 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful composition. You're a real inspiration.
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ThetaOfQuicksandFun [2013-06-10 01:02:45 +0000 UTC]
This makes me keep thinking back to the mounting discovery made mid to late last year that almost every star in the universe has at least one planet around it, thank you for taking the time to make this.
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SolarArchitect [2013-06-09 08:41:30 +0000 UTC]
Really nice and calm scene. The lightning is really well done here. Good job!
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Sequito-Equitis [2013-06-09 03:49:32 +0000 UTC]
I very much like the use of the glare/light on one corner and the shadow cast upon the rings on the corner opposite. I've just set it as my desktop background and it works great with icons grouped to the right and top.
I'm guessing there's a story to account for the rings not being aligned with the rotation as suggested by the surface clouds -- or in the plane of the moons for that matter.
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Sequito-Equitis In reply to Alpha-Element [2013-06-09 17:24:23 +0000 UTC]
Reason enough!
You're far from alone. For some reason you see images/movies of moons not in the plane of rotation along with rings a lot, even though the rings/rotation/moons all have to be in a plane to create rings in the first place.
I guess they just look cooler that way. The difference in the rings and the moons does make your moons stand out nicely -- they'd be almost hidden if they were in the same plane as the rings.
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