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Jellygraph
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[2003-10-21 02:44:16 +0000 UTC]
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 29; Deviations: 16; Watchers: 37
Watching: 66; Pageviews: 10047; Comments Made: 1253; Friends: 66
# Interests
Favorite movies: Gattaca, Spirited Away, Pride and Prejudice, Wonder Boys, Life as a House, The Virgin SuicidesFavorite bands / musical artists: Fall Out Boy, Something Corporate, Brand New, Straylight Run
Favorite writers: O.S.Card, Fowles, Faulkner, Erdrich, Austen, Pullman, Salinger, Plath, Eliot, Ginsberg, Hughes
Other Interests: spelunking
# About me
Current Residence: Ann Arbor, MI# Comments
Comments: 139
Hello! A few months ago you gave me a really wonderful in-depth critique of my poem "unsave me", and I've just now uploaded a revised second version. I was wondering if you could take a look at it and let me know if I've managed to improve it at all? I would really appreciate your opinion.
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Ah. It seems I have been neglecting this place again. Ah, well the wisdom teeth are hopping from my mouth tomorrow and I've got a pretty good idea where I'm going to spend a few days:
chilling right hurr going through the neglected deviations.
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is a Wannabe Novelist
is Female
is a deviant since Oct 20, 2003, 9:43 PM
has 3,000 pageviews
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I can't remember if I commented before but it's 3 AM and I'm liking this stuff quite a bit. I hope I remember to read it later when I have time and am awake.
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hey jell
what the hell
I hopes yer fine
I hopes
yer well
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What? We're in the same lit class? Wow, that's really really crazy. So, not really into Grimm? I think that the stories are interesting (basically just to compare them to what I heard as a child or saw in the disney movies), but they're very very repetitive and I got bored really easily when reading them. I really want to get to Alice in Wonderland. I've already read it, but I think it'll be fun to write a close reading about. Definitely one of my favorites. Well, it's been splendid. I think I'll take a look at your gallery.
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hehe, I'm still here. I have a new poem, in fact. Shocker.
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congrats on your DD--and thanks for dropping that watch on me last month. sorry for my inactivity and this unforgivable delay in expressing my gratitude. take care and thaaaank you, friend!
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thanks, amelia. i see that you're getting active again. goodo.
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we'll see! that piece is a shambles. i wrote a couple others, they'll be posted in the upcoming days, perhaps.
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Congrats on your DD, it is most deserving. Very unique & well-written, I loved it.
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~Jellygraph
is a Wannabe Novelist
is Female
is a deviant since Oct 20, 2003, 7:43 PM
has 2,000 pageviews
is located in United States
last visited 2h 8m 33s ago
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is an AIM user; marywithoutwings
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Thanks for the visit, hope you enjoyed. You've got some interesting work and some fine influences: I dig.
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Thanks for the watch! I've been called in unexpectedly to work, but I'll be looking (and most likely commenting) on your stuff real soon!
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Haha I like your work! Awesome awesome.
Oh, and also:
is a deviant since Oct 20, 2003, 7:43 PM
has 1,800 pageviews
is located in United States
Hoorah!
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You, my dear, use some some great diction in your poetry. Nice work. And you're certainly well-read and indulge in excellent films and music, too.
Anyway, thanks for the interest and support. 
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wow! ur a really talented poet! im adding you to my devwatch.
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hey there, thought i'd stop on by and see your real page instead of just waiting for your next poem to come up on the watch. incidentally i've seen the last one, just haven't read. somehow my brain is being very slow about wanting to absorb most things these days... take care now, might actually be in a writing mode here, if only in the journal. 
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Thanks so much for the devwatch!
And I took your advice on that short story I was writing and finished it. So thanks again for your critique on that. It gave me an extra incentive to continue.
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And I wish you would be more active. But in your own time.
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