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Published: 2013-02-26 18:29:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 870; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 0
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STOP!!!Please, stop a minute and give me a critique. I do appreciate "How beautiful is your drawing!" thing, but that is not going to help me. I prefer you point out in what I totally failed, thankies
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Please excuse the faves I've been making with lack of helpful critique. I very rarely have the time or the knowledge to make a critique like that. If I see something that really stands out to me I will tell you but I don't really want to pass over faving work I like because I can't think of anything helpful to say or have time to think (I'm technically learning disabled, it takes me a long time to think of things), but I don't want you to think I'm completely ignoring your request either.
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Awww...no worries *hugs* Thankies OwO
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hmmm well although Dannys done great exsageration i kinda think hes in a bit of a weird position...it just dosent look like hes running....and that didnt make any sence XD also his back leg is to big ^^ the ghost is pretty darn adorable though <3
as for the bottem sketch i think her arms might be a bit chubby...but that could be how shes supposed to be...idk who she is sooo
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Thankies >wBy the way, there are no girls in this drawing...
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huh?? oh so its a boy with long hair then??
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You should consider working in perspective, that would be a much better test.
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That would be a challenge....and I love challenges.
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And a challenge it is.
I'll finish my current project soon, been focusing on perspective for this one.
its simple posewise though.
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I'll try to critique this. Danny's back looks ready to snap, the arch is just a little over done. his feet look a little too lumpy and clumpy in my opinion, but it is just a sketch. The character on the bottoms left arm look a bit over sized by just a little bit. But other than that I can't find much else. You do an amazing job with expression though, good job. I hope this helped.
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Thankies, this helps a lot ^^
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WOW this is great!!! Da da da da da
da dum
da da da da dum
DANNY PHANTOM!!
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Sigh, so, you said you wanna critique? I thought I can try.
First of all, Danny, you catch his emotions pretty well, but he look pregnant! Really! Or you really broke something in his body. The leg what is behind him is too long compare to that one what in front of him, and also, according to perspective it suppose to be shorter. Arms...to much thing is wrong with it. I recommend you to check through this animation tutorial about running: [link] Also, ghost behind him look pretty good!
For another guy, he look pretty cute, but, his arms don't look that accurate, and again several examples, since I can't find right referents: [link] [link] So, I hope it might be helpful. Best of luck with your improvements!
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For the arms thing, thanks, I already have a stock full of nude photos.
Lol, pregnant XDD I think I broke something in him, yes XDD.
And yes, I want a critique. This is what I want.
Thankies for the running thing. Now I have something to follow. But I'll need photos of real people running.
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^.^ You're welcome! ^.^
I'm glad you alright with it, at last, that's how my own little beloved critique time to time critique myself, so, I was trying to mimic her actions! ^.^
...I thought some pose like this was in the Ace Ventura film, but I really don't remember well...
Also, can you please do me a favor and suggest some idea for art for ROTG (Not very complicated, just something what you think would look fine)
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Sure. You gave me critique, now its time yo pay.
Try with something between Jack and Pitch. Even if I saw lot of Bunny/Jack things, there's a lack of dark, really dark and evil pitch, and Jack.
And, since you are a master with dark art, you should try something that involves mind and not only body.
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I'm, the dark art master? O-o Lol wat? Oh come on, just because I draw one gore pic it doesn't made me any masterful in it. The same with the pervy stuff, I just was in the mood for drawing such kind of thing, so, I draw it.
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Well, be violent with Pitch and Jack. In a way, they are like Vlad and Danny, but different, very different.
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Well, they pretty same for me and I use them with same purposes. Just Jack is a little bit more naive, friendly and I thought cuddly! ^.^
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...and that is just PERFECT for dark stuff >w👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Why does Phantom's spine look nonexistent? I know it's for the effect of running fast, but it might be over done... 
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Mmm...Yes, I tried the spine thing but it might not work with my current style.
The foot thing is an erased line my stupid scanner got too well, but It's supposed to be deleted from the pic.
Thankies.
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