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zhabreen — old man in old city
Published: 2012-04-22 01:52:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1629; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 19
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the composition of patterns here looks really beautiful
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wow the wall is really amazing, very nice job!
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The portrait is nice, but what's really catching my attention is the wall...
Is it partially desaturated? Or is it natural?
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I think this is a pretty good photo. However there are some things you could've done to improve it (In my opinion, what that counts for).
I think you should've photographed the man from closer, as now you barely see any details from him. This composition also leaves way too much breathing space in the top. I believe 1/3 breathing space is normally considered desired. As last, I would've liked to see the horizon of the grown more straight.
Keep it up
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thank you very very much for your suggestion..I learn a lot from that
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.:^ Thanks for The 
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i like the concept but the execution seems far too unnatural too me.
Idk maybe its just a bit too posy :[
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which part do you think looks posy?
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How he sits in the chair right in front of the building is posy. It is an unnatural position for an old man to sit in it, and also a strange place to set a chair.
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ahahah I also do not understand why he did it.I don't set him to pose like that.
well,Thank you very very much for your critique ^^
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I do like this picture. It makes me curious. I like the contrast between the man in color and the black and white wall. But the orange part of the wall takes away the attention from him, and the man is blending with the background too much in my opinion. I think he should have been the only one in color, or at least the most standing out 
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okkay I get it
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Sorry for the late
You're welcome
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Maybe a bit overprocessed but I do find it interesting... who is this guy? Why is he sitting here? (was it staged or does he spend his time here?)
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he is a historic building keeper in Surabaya..he was taking a break because there were not many tourist came there
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Over-processed. Looks more like a photo-manipulation.
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thanks for the critique ^^
Which part do you think should be changed so that the picture looks better?
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The selective saturation/de-saturation is very distracting..
Basic contrast and saturation would make it a good picture.
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okkay thank you very much for your opninion..It'll help me to be better ^^
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