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AIBoobPicsForSale [2015-09-21 02:27:13 +0000 UTC]
Looks pretty good! I think more distinct directional lighting/cast shadows would help it. At the moment things are lit very ambient and soft/flat, like if the sky was overcast; it makes it harder to discern distances when each layer of distance is more or less the same brightness. In the reference image, the stripes of shadows on the ground/wall help to show how much space is between each wall segment on the left. This is partly because it gives parallel lines and detail that skew the more the distance increases, and also because objects we can't see are casting those shadows, helping to emphasize space. The variations in the material/dirtiness of the stone help to separate each layer of distance, too.
Overall, though, you captured the geometry well!
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zero0810 In reply to AIBoobPicsForSale [2015-09-22 18:44:29 +0000 UTC]
I still have a lot to learn about backgrounds x_x
Thanks for the tips, I will keep in mind for the next time!
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FreakyZi [2015-07-08 20:51:23 +0000 UTC]
it look really neat but the drapes look odd, it didn't look too parallel with the building, the door too look kindda long (?) maybe, but it's really a good attempt, good job ^w^b
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IsidoraN [2015-07-08 18:14:56 +0000 UTC]
awesome
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PokemonTrainerNaira [2015-07-08 09:37:55 +0000 UTC]
It's a neat picture. If you had not said that about the perspective I wouldn't have realized XD But looking at it closely it qoudn't feel wrong if the wooden path was a bit curved to te right. Because the arches and walls seem to being curved to that side too. Just a little bit, from my point of view.
Anyway, it's really cool and the purple/blue on the clothes is a nice effect ^w^
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zero0810 In reply to Malkalady [2015-07-08 17:48:22 +0000 UTC]
That's the kind of thing I usually do when I'm about to end a drawing, but this time I was so done (and the temperature is so high x_x) that I just though "screw it, colours are done, you're finished" xD. Regarding the texture, I just found it and I like it so much that I wanted to use it immediately (= I slapped it on the drawing without thinking too much).
Thanks for the tips, I'll surely consider them the next time!
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Tokunoriel [2015-07-07 20:48:01 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! if you full-view it, it feels like you can actually walk through the walkway! loving the arches and drapes! and the flare of the cloaked figure!
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zero0810 In reply to Tokunoriel [2015-07-08 17:41:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! ^^
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