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Published: 2009-04-29 23:32:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 338; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 1
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First CG, gimme feedback, yo.Kaito belongs to the company that created the Vocaloids.
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The eyesssssssss
Really lovely.
The line art is clean too, that's a nice touch!
Maybe add more shade and highlights next time?
But excellent for a first time!!!
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XD thanx, tho you can barely see anything for thee eyes
lineart aint clean, i just resized it.
and.... i'll keep it in mind ^^ thanx, i'll try to keep on improving
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YOU GOT IT DONEEEEEEEEEEEEEE /TAT/~
PFFFF-- ANDYOUTOLDMETHEHAIRANDSKINLOOKEDTERRIBLE xDDDDD;;; liaaarrrrrr~<3
Wow... The way you do eyes are really nice ;u;<3 like, really really!<3
Annnd, I already told you your shadings are awesomeeeeee~;v; as is the bird! . . . that sounds weird.... but it is! xDD;;<33
and I already told you your lineart is so nice and clean ;u;<3 .... And I think I forgot to tell you how f*cking much I love his expression ;A;<333 AAAHHHHHHZEPHYOUDIDSOAWESOME >w<
mmnn... for feedback, I'm guessing you want a little crits?
Only things I can really point out would be that ther're no shadings on his face (makes it look a little flat) anndd, altho' the hair looks good the way it is, the shadings start a bit... harshly? you might want to add some by the back of his head(where the sun doesn't shine) to get a bit mor depth and usage of the lightsource? *sucks at giving critskthnx* DON'T LISTEN TO ME D|
FFFFF, whyyy must your first cg be so well done damn youuu DDD| -shot-
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XDDDDD thanx thanx. .. and thee bird is an awefully random thing to compliment btw.
yea... i didnt know where to put the shadows w/o it looking weird ><. need more experience i guess. And... the back of the head.... got it.
XD i still have a long way to go
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BUT THE BIRD IS AWESOME HENCE IT MUST BE COMPLIMENTED =w=b
MMM... Hair is prolly the most difficult thing to CG ever D|
Anndd, as stated; I have no idea. Just try out stuff till you find whatever works for you > <
Pff, if that's so then at least you got one hell of a good start =w=b
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er.... THANK YOU??? 8D
for me, skin is a very close second in hardness level OTLL
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very nice, congrats on first cg! vocaloidsss, woo! its good to see you finally coloring! Maybe throw in some brighter highlights(closer to the sun and on hair maybe), and darker shadows(like under the bangs)? but it really does look very good and you probably don'teven need that, just submit morrrreee!
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thanx, i'll keep the tips in mind. yea.... this cg took way too long ><;
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NICEESSSSUUUUUUU!!!!!! -tackles- Not bad for your first Cg...:/ is 1000000x times better then mine anyways...XDDD When i saw it in my messages i was like "hmmm i wonder who did zeph do the collab with? the coloring looks pro" ..>///////<
KEEP UP THE GOODD WOORRKK KAYYY AND SURPASSSSS PARA!
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XD;;;
pro? hardly.
pft. you make it sound as if i CAN surpass her
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Of course you can Zeph...XDD just need more confindence and practice...
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; AA; *ALREADY TOLD YOU HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS PICTURE* <3333
GAHHH I LOVE IT ZEPHYYYY THANK YOUUUUUuu
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oi oi you... werent serious about the ipod thing, right?
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D8 of course I was!
you thought I was kidding? LOL
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Awesome! I love Kaito. His voice is so soft and relaxing. <3
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