Comments: 13
DogmaTide [2018-01-15 02:44:31 +0000 UTC]
A fabulous, and accurate, rendering of the highs and lows of indulging and withholding from one's addiction. Truly caught my eye. Thanks for your art.
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AlanDu [2017-09-10 19:15:00 +0000 UTC]
A very psychological piece. Love this! I particularly love the colouring.
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mess2405459 [2017-01-27 12:11:36 +0000 UTC]
I would like to say that I admire all art. I understand that you have your own style and I only want to help if possible. You can completely ignore me if you wish
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The focus of the art piece is a bit unclear. Which allows viewers to choose between OFF or ON. The right middle and ring fingers of the OFF character are too pinkish. They look as if they belong to the ON character. The ON character is missing their right shoulder. If they are the same person as the OFF character, at least a small bit of their shoulder should show. The buttons and the brain-things seem to be added after the characters were finished. This might be the intended effect but if it's not here is my opinion: Moving the OFF character's brain thing a bit upwards to fit with the skull's curve will give it a feeling of belonging. A small amount of shading at the bottom of ON's button will make it look as part of the expected look. If this is a real life problem I suggest proper help from experts. I am NOT a doctor or an art critic.
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zephy0 In reply to mess2405459 [2017-01-27 23:26:16 +0000 UTC]
ok ^_^ Thank you for your critique. I can see where you're coming from.. don't really understand the logic of some of it, but thank you.
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whatanonsense [2017-01-15 12:06:40 +0000 UTC]
The "On"-part looks more self-confident. But it seems to be completely gone as well, where the "Off"-part is more "here". Nicely done!
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hanabunni [2017-01-15 11:10:32 +0000 UTC]
I reminds me of a person addicted to the internet and is happy when has electronics on and is on the internet. His addiction grows so deep that if he gets separated from them he will fall into despair, and he is depressed due to being on the screen all the time. Beautiful piece~
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ThunderFD [2017-01-14 18:30:20 +0000 UTC]
damn that's pretty good, it really shows whats in the description really well
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applepawful [2017-01-14 16:36:59 +0000 UTC]
This piece is painfully relatable.
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Memy-chan [2017-01-14 16:16:46 +0000 UTC]
Love the emotions in this piece c:
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