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Published: 2015-12-16 19:10:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 29258; Favourites: 698; Downloads: 0
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Mai... the thought about her seeped into me - something about her intrigued me. From what Betzen alluded to, she might be one of us - but somehow she wasn't escorted in like the rest. She seemed to have materialized from behind the couch much to the Betzen's chagrin, so I can only guesstimate that she might have managed to escape her clutches before... but how? Then, instead of an answer, a faint moaning crawled into the station...
Original idea - DesmondHyena , story by me, thanks Vaatiwithblue for co-writing!
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I honestly thought that the doctor was gonna come and save her XD
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I was listening to this while reading, I thought it fits perfectly.
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Those sounds definitely make me think of a train.
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should make an anime with a character like that
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I guessing 'guesstimate' is a mix between guess and estimate?
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Guesstimate ? That's a real word ?
Or, is it like 'adorkable' ?
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Man this is definately an amazing Comic and it's getting even more exciting with every page
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perhaps. or something big that likes screeching.
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well meow face to you too! :3
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I love it. And her pose!
Buuuut... I do have one complaint, guesstimate is in a way slang, a combination of the word guess and estimate, it sounds kinda weird here...
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Actually, "guesstimate" have become an official word in the dictionary. You can google it's definition and find it on official dictionary cites.
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Oh goodie, the silent hill monsters are on the way. Might be time to bail now that she has the pics.
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Ok time to check out!! No need to even see the horrifying Monster.
/chicken mode activated/
( Because of the text I start thinking the Cargirl may be a false Flag insider Job working together with Betzen. )
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Someone call rick and the gang we got us some walkers!!!
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Ho boy, here we go! Last stop, Seelena Zorn Station.
So who's in the train, Mai or Desmond? *-*
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oh my gosh...it's getting sooooooooo gooooooood!
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Did a train finally pull into the station?
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What is the noise.....O-O it doesn't sound friendly
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and sudden;y your safe place away form others becomes your nightmare.
this is fun t read. at first i thought it was an imaginary place, than i got farther into the story
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Dreamscapes collide. The proximity to the other girls makes the dimensional bubble of all of them to merge.
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Oh dear it doesn't sound like anything pleasant is about to happen. I'm actually kinda nervous
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I don't know why, but the detail on her tail really caught my attention on this image. And it made me wonder.....do you have a brush you use for fur textures, or do you hand paint if from scratch each time you need the detail to show up?
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All the other times she was there alone.
Now something is there with her.
Was it already there and she never noticed or did it come with her?
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I bet it came with her. I know one thing for sure....SHIT IS ABOUT TO GET REAL!
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