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Published: 2016-10-17 19:34:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1748; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 5
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Description Welp, this is going to be my first Comic (don't be to hard to me .-. -> Broken English)
At first:
I dedicate this comis to my friend Deborah  
If I'm not sure with something, she'll helped me out

Some Informations:
This story happens in another AU, I'll call it 'Brokentale'.
At first I don't want to spoiler t much... 
Frisk is the main character and is not genderless... it is to complicated for me (I wanted to make Frisk a boy but I failed .-.)
This story starts with Frisk falling down the surface, so there are no informations how this world went to this point.
If you want to, I can make a short description of the events so you can understand why the characters ther developed like this.
Or I can make another comic as a prologue.... or a pre-history... (I don't know the right word for this .-.)
But if I should do a comic like pre....history... there have to be enough readers   
It is really exhausting to do the comic with my hands. 

I'm also sorry if a story like this already exists. I just met Undertale 3 weeks ago  
So I don't know everything (very sorry .-.)
I'll also try do upload it regular.

Last thing I should know: 
If I get a tablet during this comic -> Should I make it on the laptop? Or do you like the way it already is?
This is my only question  
But it could take time to get a tablet so.... no need to decide now.

Last but not least:
Undertale belongs to Toby Fox
The story BrokenTale is just my thought.

Have fun

First Page

The pre-history of the comic is here now:
BrokenTale, before Frisk fell down  



(This is not the BrokenTale you search for in the internet )
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Comments: 9

ELgenius11 [2018-09-01 18:31:25 +0000 UTC]

time to add this to the list
figured id comment and ask whats the status for this before i go all in
finished?
ongoing?
canceled? 
Finished in another format (scripts posted, animatics, notes, whatever behind the scenes art terms apply) and realeased?
on hiatus but will come back someday?
all that was planned to do was finished, with a reasonable conclusion?
notes are on a different blog instead?
basically just trying to help myself into NOT getting sucked into something that may stay unresolved
either way seeems amazing

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ZeldaOkamifreak In reply to ELgenius11 [2018-10-11 19:48:25 +0000 UTC]

Finished: No
Ongoing: Yes, but a long break atm, I'm sorry about this.
Canceled: No, never.

Always make notes and continue them, changing them, destroying ideas and add new other ones.
But they are not released, private. Actually could upload it somewhere, like Wattpad.

On hiatus yes, will come back as soon as I find a new own home.

I don't understand this question (I'm sorry, not native language .-.)

Notes are private but I can think about uploading them.

Thank you, and it hurts even myself not to continue it while others comment how much they love to read more.

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ELgenius11 In reply to ZeldaOkamifreak [2018-10-11 19:58:32 +0000 UTC]

yea thanks for answering,
ps the "all that was planned to do was finished, with a reasonable conclusion?" was BASICALLY the same as the various "finished/finished in another format/notes on another blog" and i accidentally was redundant 

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ZeldaOkamifreak In reply to ELgenius11 [2018-10-11 20:07:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, sorry for answering late.

Okay, thank you for your polite explanation

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SoulerClash [2017-02-20 00:47:00 +0000 UTC]

This looks awesome!

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ZeldaOkamifreak In reply to SoulerClash [2017-03-04 14:07:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you   

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Texanna7 [2017-01-30 19:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Okay.

This looks freaking sick!

In a good way.

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ZeldaOkamifreak In reply to Texanna7 [2017-01-30 20:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much
Hope you'll have fun with the comic

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Texanna7 In reply to ZeldaOkamifreak [2017-01-30 21:36:49 +0000 UTC]

 

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