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TNC-N3Cl [2021-06-21 10:04:03 +0000 UTC]
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emilystar1 [2018-05-18 22:43:59 +0000 UTC]
Hey I hear your almost done and I can wait to see Link battle against him!!
This could be fun. HE HE HE
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Vulp3s [2018-05-01 11:42:28 +0000 UTC]
Why can't you just stay down and give Link a break!
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AkuDemyfan [2018-04-27 22:17:23 +0000 UTC]
This is really cool! You've done awesome job with the first part of the battle!
Now, I admit straight off, I didn't realize Link to have had the fairy and broken the glass in the beginning. I understood that only after reading your describtion. Sorry! In reality, I bit feared someone got him already. (Hit him with glass or something... XD) In fact, I wondered who was by Link before Yunobo saved two Hylians, which I later on realized to be the same duo from the beginning and NOT by Link. -.-' It took me moment even when I saw Link stand alone and no-one having realized his revival.
Anyways, awesome words from Link! Sadly, he's not the only one with "fairy". =/ And things are only looking worse now. First round is over, second is up for beginning and looking harder than the first round. D= Yet, all Heroes are standing and Link's certainly ready for the battle this time around.
As in other notions, it took me a moment to realize the different sword handle with the two Hylians of which neither is Link. Along with the shadow of the rock, which, I first thought to be Yunobo's shadow. What I liked is the fact of when Link swings the sword is in line with where the sword is back on the ground. This probably was what bit fooled me into thinking that someone got Link killed instead of what actually happened. I feel bad for Sidon having gotten shocked! D= Poor guy. But luckily it takes more than that to take him down. I also like the fact that Link needed to break the bottle instead of the fairy actually coming automatically out when he dies like in all of the games.
Eager to see the actual fights! But, as always, do take your time and don't rush.
If you want a tip considering battle scenes, here's one:
When I write a fighting scene, I play it on slow-mode in my head. This means mainly for going the battle strike by strike and thinking through the best way to answer into the attack (block, avoid, attack or something else).
For an example, let's think the enemy strikes diagonally from up to down, left to right, the good guy's response will depend on lot of things but usually, in my stories, it would be one of the next:
- Countering the attack from opposite way and then having bit of a battle for which of them is stronger, even with the good guy having bit harder position
- Backing off and avoiding the attack, yet this might end up with the good guy keep on backing off from the attacks and possibly getting into trouble by someone or something attacking from behind or the good guy backing into a wall, tree or something else happening like stumbling
- Attacking which ends into hoping to be quicker than the enemy and getting the strike in like into legs
- Backflipping away and hoping to be quick enough to get ready for the next attack or in even better situation to launch an attack of his / her / its own
- Avoiding by moving to side and attacking while probably getting it in from low if moved to right and from high if moved to left
Obviously these are just ideas and the good guy's own position, the actual situation, the character's past and present along with lot of other things affect the choice of action.
But, as long as you can imagine the situation, you also can draw it (or write in my case). Just take it slow and think the battle scene through carefully while taking all into count. I'm absolutely certain you'll astonish me and others by your choice of actions and drawing skills! OH! And no pressure even with the given words. Just enjoy, don't stress and everything will certainly flow nice and easy.
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llobrien13 [2018-04-27 18:16:34 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant as always! Absolutely love this!!!
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Connor-Coccino [2018-04-27 00:25:23 +0000 UTC]
Wait what is this
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emilystar1 [2018-04-26 22:34:06 +0000 UTC]
LINK, YOUR ALIVE!!!!
COME HERE YOU!!!
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emilystar1 In reply to zelda-Freak91 [2018-05-08 14:06:01 +0000 UTC]
How it going my friends, still ways to go?
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zelda-Freak91 In reply to emilystar1 [2018-05-08 16:32:13 +0000 UTC]
Yeah...unfortunately. I'm a bit short on time lately...
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AMerope [2018-04-26 20:03:38 +0000 UTC]
Wait, then does that mean the Yiga are monsters?!
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silverheartlugia2000 [2018-04-26 18:44:15 +0000 UTC]
GO LINK!!!!!!!!!! oh but that darn blood moon... TIME DO YOU STILL HAVE THAT ONI MASK???? CAN YOU DO THAT MOON SLICING THING IN WARRIORS PERHAPS???
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Squabasaurus [2018-04-26 18:29:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah....always fun when the blood moon comes RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF A BOSS BATTLE!!!!
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The-Delta-42 [2018-04-26 18:28:17 +0000 UTC]
Did the Master Sword break?
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MajorasMasks [2018-04-26 18:22:56 +0000 UTC]
Intense, can't wait for the next part! ^^
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Felina-Faerlaingal [2018-04-26 17:36:02 +0000 UTC]
YAY FAIRY!!!!!
Damnit it's like a bad weed, you just can't get rid of it!
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