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Published: 2011-03-20 14:34:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 803; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Well seems something can be worked out .. or just agreed on heheOh yeah here a note I really don't want critic really on my comic unless it is in the form of
telling me how the story is going (would love that)
panel set up (more then happy to hear)
misspelled words (tell me lol)
Anything other then those unless it super important i will ignore. Not nice to say but i will ignore it ok =3 And thanx for reading
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angel, just eat the cookie and.....uhh...Zamie, what are you doing standing behind Rayleen with that giant scissor!?.
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XD she cut herself on screen
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hard to tell, she looks more like she's threatning to clip Rayleen if she tells Angel what happened back at the kitchen other than the cookies.
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The whole meaning of you can't judge a book by its cover o.o
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If she's not gonna eat em, give em to me! XD I still want one.
Love the expression when she's holding the scissors, its absolutely adorable.
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x3 always up for a new tester
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Hi there
Hehehe, probably by the time Angel gets to try one, they'll be all gone XD Great page sis!
Euan
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XD yeah seem about right
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Critic-focus request acknowledged!
-The story seems to be progressing well... I'm not sure where it's going, or what twists or whatever will happen, but I get the sense that this comic isn't supposed to be super ultra-epic, it's mostly just for fun... right? ^^
-The panels seem to be done very well! On this particular page there aren't all that many, so it's hard to go wrong. (I like the third one's design. 
-misspellings? I'll keep on the look out! In panel one, does she mean to say "advice"[n] instead of "advise"[v]?
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^^ thanx for reading the artist comment
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1. =3 thank you for view point on the story. It suppose to keep you guessing and i am not sure if i want to just yet get all deeper like i want hardly can do what i want without alot of people saying this and that 
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3 yeah she should say advise ..*looks* oh my XD slip of the finger i better fix it
^^ thanx for critic it was very appreciated
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Ok! and I shall look out for future opportunities to critique as well. ^^
I'm not saying few panels is a bad thing... indeed, if that's all it take for you to say all you need to in that page, then don't add any extra, I say!
Same goes for speech bubbles. If you can say all that needs to be said through the pictures and nothing else, then that can be very effective! (though, that's on very rare occasions. heh.)
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hehe another pretty nice job kitty. the pare is very well done.
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Kawai everywhere)))
And someone can't stop eat this tasty cookie *om nom nom*
I want one too ^^"
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x3 yeah she can be a nibbler
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she cut away the panel with the burning in it... wonder where it went? lol
and you spelled 'suggest' wrong, thats something... i want some of that brownie cookie dream thing that looks like an eraser! 8)
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x3 thank you =3 i know i can be a misspell queen i will fix it
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Kekeke~yesh Angel eat it,and feel the rainbows flow within you...LOL!
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LOL she cut the pannel...hey wait! hey! tape it together zamie! lol
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XD hehe glad you like that panel
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