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Zaithyluv — Gone
Published: 2010-01-27 03:24:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 1
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I watch, my throat burning, as Charlotte tryed to save him. She pressed her ear against his heart for a few moments, listening desperatley. Suddenly, she placed her hands on his chest and began to rythmically pump them against it. Trying to get him to breath. 1...2...3...1...2...3. After several moments of this, she clamped her fingers across his nostrils, leaned over and pressed her lips against my brother's cold ones. I saw his chest expand with the force of Charlotte's breath, but nothing was happening. She continued pumping, frantically now. Silence. She stopped and straightened, her eyes blurry with tears. "Torch," she whispered "You're brother's gone." I lurch forward and push her aside, kneeling beside him. Roger tried to rest a hand on my back and say something to calm me, but I recoiled away from his touch. I take Sigmund's hand, pressing those cold, familiar fingers into my cheek, sobs beginning to wrack my body. My brother...my brother...my brother! I take off my jacket and lay it over the bullet hole in his chest, trying to stop the crimson from flowing. "It's going to be OK, Sig! ...it's going to be ok..."-Flip
Art, Characters, story (c) me
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Comments: 7
Wow. :C That's... really, really sad. You really captured the mood in your picture with the gloomy environment, and in the text as well. It makes the viewer feel sad for Sigmund as well. Nicely done. <3
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Awh, thank you! Funny you mention the enviroment, because all it is is just a few scribbles of grey that I blurred! xD But yes, I'll miss my wittle Siggy.
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:C Oh, jeeze. You certainly know how to pull off such a sad moment, I do have to say.
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Thank you. I appreciate it!
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Awh, thanks. He was one of my favorite characters in my book, too. I cried when I wrote this part for the first time.
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oh i see ):
but your welcome c:
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