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sammychan816 [2013-06-11 13:18:55 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful.
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Emily-Young [2012-09-12 11:29:39 +0000 UTC]
This looks awesome!!! 8D
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yuski In reply to Emily-Young [2012-09-14 09:42:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks^^
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Emily-Young In reply to yuski [2012-09-14 18:10:31 +0000 UTC]
No problem!^^
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aha-mccoy [2012-09-12 05:18:25 +0000 UTC]
jΓ‘ estou indo ler!
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Letdragon [2012-09-11 20:40:52 +0000 UTC]
Page 1: "How can the Cansulo have so drastically different environments?" I would replace so with "such".
Page 5: "Didn't though it." Though should be "think of".
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yuski In reply to Letdragon [2012-09-14 09:42:12 +0000 UTC]
With page 01, IΒ΄ll keep the way it is.
On page 05, I Β΄ll fix it because the revision altered some dialogues and I changed the back.
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Letdragon In reply to yuski [2012-09-14 14:32:39 +0000 UTC]
Why? That's not the proper use of so. You normally use it for referencing a single direct object.
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