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MMDAnimatio357 [2015-09-25 01:21:50 +0000 UTC]
Great improvement! I can see more flow and balance in terms of anatomy in the newer one ^v^b
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Kiyara87 [2013-03-18 09:18:29 +0000 UTC]
Maybe you can try to draw cleaner. But is is on a good way ^^
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YumeNatsuki In reply to Kiyara87 [2013-03-18 15:47:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^-^
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starfire808 [2013-03-17 02:48:10 +0000 UTC]
a lot improvement in one year.
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Rdy4Zimpact [2013-03-16 16:07:07 +0000 UTC]
such great improvement! the one from before felt a bit too "stiff" while the newest one has more flow and feeling in it...simply beautiful! ^^
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chillua [2013-03-16 12:55:14 +0000 UTC]
AMG YR COLOURSSSSS
WHYYYYY
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YumeNatsuki In reply to chillua [2013-03-16 13:34:37 +0000 UTC]
Whatcha mean why XD Be satisfied with yur own colors already 8'D
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chillua In reply to YumeNatsuki [2013-03-16 13:42:21 +0000 UTC]
OKOK. BUT STILL...
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YumeNatsuki In reply to chillua [2013-03-16 17:19:18 +0000 UTC]
I think your lines and your backgrounds are even more awesome ΓΆAΓΆ
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chillua In reply to YumeNatsuki [2013-03-17 07:18:05 +0000 UTC]
lol if u say lines awesome i m okay BUT NOT BACKGROUNDS DUDE.
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YumeNatsuki In reply to chillua [2013-03-17 10:13:18 +0000 UTC]
But yours look so detailed ΓΆAΓΆ
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chillua In reply to YumeNatsuki [2013-03-17 10:35:51 +0000 UTC]
yes maybe it's detailed but THE PERPECTIVEEEEEE OTL
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YumeNatsuki In reply to chillua [2013-03-17 10:37:33 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh enemy is your biggest enemy, don't worry about that so much 8D
Btw how exactly are adoptables working ΓΆ3ΓΆ? *she wants to do some*
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chillua In reply to YumeNatsuki [2013-03-17 11:05:19 +0000 UTC]
ahhhhhh but we still need to improve right
omg srsly?? YES GO DO. CAN EARN MUCH POINTS.
its like selling your designs to others XD
and you can use a base to design them too (SO U DONT NEED TO WORRY ABT YR ANATOMY)
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YumeNatsuki In reply to chillua [2013-03-17 11:14:05 +0000 UTC]
Yesh we do.
Yesh ΓΆAΓΆ <3 Since I wanna buy the hoodie when it's already 45% offeh but I dun have the monneeeh~
I'm not confident bout that ΓΆ3ΓΆ <3 Since if I use others' bases it would feel so unoriginal..
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chillua In reply to YumeNatsuki [2013-03-18 08:56:47 +0000 UTC]
LOL ANYWAYS GOOD LUCKKK
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Esvandetta [2013-03-16 07:17:39 +0000 UTC]
Ehh! That's pretty good improvement! ^__^ let's see if you can get BETTER! HAHAH!
Right now, I would suggest practicing clothing wrinkles. Your face looks really good and your hair is definitely coming along... ^___^ You, obviously, already know what is wrong with it anatomically, so I'll bate my breath there..
Good luck and keep up the good work!
~TLA
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YumeNatsuki In reply to Esvandetta [2013-03-16 08:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, thank you, I'll do my best! ^-^
Oh I think I should~
Hmm..maybe it can help if you give me some little advices for anatomy though :3? If you want I mean xD
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Esvandetta In reply to YumeNatsuki [2013-03-17 02:46:28 +0000 UTC]
Well... the main problem you have is in the arms. If she (yes I can tell it's a she... barely) is in a neutral relaxed pose, then the arms are relaxed as well and don't hug the sides of the body like that. When drawing the torso, I always start with the chest first and then work myself down to the hips before I even think about the arms.
Here's a good reference sheet for general anatomy and a style of proportions: [link]
Remember that proportions vary between styles. My personal style is realistic so the proportions I use are based on real people. Anime proportions are much simpler and freer, but tend to be inaccurate under most circumstances...
[link]
here is the rough proportions. This is my no means the ONLY way. Alot of people say that's the only way, but it's not... I personally hate how both look and having it so generalized makes it harder to follow. If you want my version, I'll explain it, but overall it's best to make sure you fit those basics (or close enough) and then just do your own thing when it comes to measuring...
I hope some of this was help, if it wasn't let me know... okay?
~TLA
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YumeNatsuki In reply to Esvandetta [2013-03-17 10:44:02 +0000 UTC]
Wahh thank you very much, these were very good advices and I think you helped me really much >u< <3 I try to look for that next time I'm drawing~
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Esvandetta In reply to YumeNatsuki [2013-03-18 15:20:42 +0000 UTC]
Mmmk! If you ever need more help, I'm always around....
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ComvassArt [2013-03-16 04:55:05 +0000 UTC]
Wow.. It's a really great improvementsss...
Good job there! //shot
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YumeNatsuki In reply to ComvassArt [2013-03-16 08:03:50 +0000 UTC]
Yeay thankchu Ava-chan
I gave my best to improve Β°wΒ° <3
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ComvassArt In reply to YumeNatsuki [2013-03-17 01:29:36 +0000 UTC]
<3 you're welcome~
Keep up your good work there~
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