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Published: 2013-06-20 21:32:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 365; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Some random idea that came up while doodling... Seems like most of my art is like that nowadays.Anyway, I tried to color differently to experiment, but it just ended up looking like my usual style. I do like the jacket shading though?
Ha, as for the music in the background, I copied and pasted a line from Moonlight Sonata in because I didn't know what else to do.
Are you supposed to wear shorts under your skirt, because that's what I've always done for my school uniform...
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Comments: 5
this is a very nice drawing! the background is very beautiful and i like the ways you scattered the stars evenly through the bottom part and how the clouds in the sky look so fluffy. also, the music adds to the composition
i'm not very sure what the girl is sitting on though
something i noticed though is the shadow cast by the girl doesn't seem to be in the same direction the light source is coming from. the pose also doesnt seem very natural, but she may be posing for something we dont know about c: at the bottom of the skirt, i noticed that it looks like it's partially floating off the ground while it should be flat on the ground. her arm that's resting on her leg looks like its been flattened.
overall, i really do like this piece! there are just a few things you could tweak here and there :L i hope this critique helps!
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Ah thanks for critiquing you were really helpful especially the part about the skirt and the girl's arm. I dont think i noticed that until you pointed it out.
I guess it goes to show I need to be a bit more careful and not brush over stuff like they're nothing.
anyway, thanks again for doing this and for your kind comments as well as the critique.
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no problem! i'm glad i could help n-n
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oh my goodness.. you're so awesome, you've improved so much since last time I was actually on dA. anf question: HOW DO YOU FEET. THEYRE PERFECT.
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idk I've been practicing drawing feet for a while so I guess it finally paid off?
omg thanks for your kind comment! ah you're really awesome too.
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