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TheFineBrony [2013-10-21 20:54:11 +0000 UTC]
I wish I could draw half as good as you. Great job!
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AC-whiteraven [2013-08-29 23:19:31 +0000 UTC]
very cute, you've inspired me to draw something with those two characters :3
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yeendip In reply to AC-whiteraven [2013-08-30 05:53:58 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I'm all for more pictures with Rainbow Dad, can't wait to see it!
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cajobif [2013-08-29 02:58:13 +0000 UTC]
Rainbow Dash: But daddy.... what if I become even better than you?
Dad: Well, Rainbow Dash... don't stop and become the best flyer Equestria ever seen.
Rainbow Dash: Daddy....
Dad: *smiles* I'd be so proud of you.... my little Dashie...
Rainbow Dash: *tears and smile*
Dad: But until then, you'll need to do your homeworks, eat your vegetables and practice much more instead of taking those naps on the clouds...
Rainbow Dash: Awwww d'dad....
Dad: Hey! You'll need a lot of work before beating me at a race...
Rainbow Dash: Oh, be so sure that I'll beat you someday, d'dad... and that day will be glorious!
Dad: Yes. That day will be. My little filly will become a big girl.... *smile*
Rainbow Dash: *stare at him with tear in her eyes and mouth stand agape* Oh! Daddy.... *flying to her father and hug him*
Dad: *returns the hug* You'll always be my little Dashie *kiss on her forehead* *tear in his eye*
Rainbow Dash: I love you daddy.
Dad: *tight the hug one last time before letting her go* *sigh* Let's go home before it's becoming too dark.
Rainbow Dash: *nod*
Dad: Back home, you'll be able to clean your room.... you know... the one you forgot to clean yesterday?
Rainbow Dash: What? But I did it last week!
Dad: It needs a cleaning, big time.
Rainbow Dash: *sigh* Uh... didn't you just said that I needed to practice more? Cleaning my room would make me... uh... lose precious time for practice and....
Dad: Nice try. You practice in the day, not in the night. Since we're this close to the night... I wouldn't recommend any.
Rainbow Dash: But d'dad...
Dad: Enough. You'll clean you room, little one.
Rainbow Dash: Tsh! Fine. So.... first one at home is a.... chicken! *she flies in direction of their home*
Dad: Hey! Not fair! *to himself* (She surely will be a very fine pegasus one day. I'm sure she'll fly faster than anypony in no time. But what a stubborn filly!) Wait for me, cheater! *begins to fly in Rainbow Dash direction*
Rainbow Dash: Haha! Too slow! Come on daddy, mom is waiting....
Dad: to himself (And a cocky one too! Must take that from her mother.)
Wonderful work. It inspired me this short story. Tell me if you like it.
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yeendip In reply to cajobif [2013-08-29 08:09:39 +0000 UTC]
That was really adorable dialogue, and well paced.
I love it, thank you so much for sharing this!
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cajobif In reply to yeendip [2013-08-29 22:37:37 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure.
Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it, but it's thanks to your artwork that the story came in mind. Really.
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Arrowhead-of-doom In reply to cajobif [2013-08-29 06:55:37 +0000 UTC]
I can't even begin to say how great your short fic was. It's just so well done. You have a talent for this.
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cajobif In reply to Arrowhead-of-doom [2013-08-29 22:37:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it. The great artwork helped a lot.
I've been doing this since a couple of months now.
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LightningFlick [2013-08-29 02:08:05 +0000 UTC]
D'awwww, I always love seeing these two drawn together, having some father-daughter moments.
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crasydwarf [2013-08-28 09:26:37 +0000 UTC]
AT LEAST YOU CAN DO SHADING FFF---
WHY ARE WE SHOUTING?
Looks cute ^^
Expression work is very well accomplished. And clouds look great. Super duper puffy
Nicely done Cass
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yeendip In reply to crasydwarf [2013-08-28 09:53:29 +0000 UTC]
Oh, were we shouting? I'm sorry...
Huge, puffy cotton-candy clouds are my favorite. So yummy!
Thanks!
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