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Description There grows a garden not far away,
Where gentle breezes make flowers sway,
By an iron fence the world's kept out,
But from it zephyrs spread fragrances all about.

Planted long ago by the Master's hand,
Now tended by wee folk, an angel band,
Beautiful flowers grow from edge to edge,
Totally protected by the tall iron hedge.

Living close by the garden was young Pete,
Twisted from birth, from shoulder to feet,
Walking with a shuffle and a bit of a jerk,
Folks avoided him with a taunting smirk.

Every day to the iron fence he came,
To take in the beauty, to escape his shame,
To be close to the flowers, their beauty to behold,
His lonesome sadness, their fragrance did enfold.

He searched for a gate, but none could be found,
Along the fence he shuffled, around and around,
Then one day 'twas a wee one he met, who said
"To enter reach for a flower's petalled head,
'Tis the Master's hand you' ll find instead."

So Pete stretched through to touch a flower,
But none could he reach by his own power,
A flower all bright and red, toward him bent,
He strained and stretched his strength now spent.

Again the flower moved, into his hand it bent,
And through an unseen gate he mysteriously went,
Amid the flowers he stood amazed,
His joy filled eyes shined tear glazed.

>From that day on Pete worked in the garden,
The flowers loving care, he became their warden,
Happy he was, but still lonely to be sure,
To the pickers of his life he still sought cure.

He tended the garden with love and mirth,
Such beauty not experienced since his day of birth,
The wee ones watched his gnarled hands work,
They cried as they watched him walk with a jerk.

Then from the midst of the flowers the Master did talk,
"Hurry to the center of the garden, you must walk,
I have a bush there that needs your special care,
Go quickly, I'll speak again to you there."

So off shuffled Pete, for the center he did depart,
As he went the garden's beauty filled his heart,
The further he went, the taller the flowers did grow,
Then into the center he fell, tripping over his own toe.

Lifting his head, he looked around quite shaken,
What place is this, the Master must be mistaken,
At the edge of a wide circle of dry dirt he did lay,
His sorrowful tears, turned dirt to a thin film of clay.

In the center of the circle was a withered old bush,
Twisted and gnarled, thorns from its branches did push,
No leaves, no flowers, all dry, it looked ,
As others had looked at him, he stared at it with dread.

>From outside the circle a voice said, bright and clear,
"Go to the bush, all will be well, have no fear."
So with his withered legs, to the withered bush he went,
All the way questioning, why he was sent.

The Master spoke again, loud and bold,
"Reach into the branches and pull as you take hold."
Just as the thorns pierced, it wasn't wood he held, but flesh,
The air about him, the fragrance of a rose, new and fresh.

The dirt about him was now new grass of emerald green.
In his hands, the arms of a maiden, such beauty he'd never seen,
The Master said, " Meet Rose, it is for you, here she grew,
Look close, you've both been made anew."

There the Rose maiden stood, surrounded by all that is love,
A new young Pete felt like he could fly like a dove,
Like her fragrance, her warmth filled the air about her,
Now once again, Pete's eyes with tears of joy did blur.

She gently smiled and quietly they talked,
And through the garden they lovingly walked,
Arm in arm, heart to heart,
The Master's pledge, "never would they part."

The wee folk laughed as they watched with glee,
Pete and Rose dancing together, forever free.
Love filled the garden as the flower's essence had before,
A beautiful Rose and a brand new Pete, lived in the garden forever more.

But 'tis a curious thing to yet be told,
The cruel world looked through the fence to behold,
A twisted, gnarled old man, pierced and tangled,
In an old rose bush, on the ground and mangled.

This story now, is yours to mind,
Reach out for a flower, new life to find,
In the Master's hand, who for you arose,
A new life he will give you, like that of Pete and of Rose.


©by D. R. Hartle
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Comments: 54

Lifeshade [2011-09-11 17:50:08 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful. All of it is really fabulous.

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yaamas In reply to Lifeshade [2011-10-06 11:43:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your sweet words.

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Lifeshade In reply to yaamas [2011-10-10 00:29:10 +0000 UTC]

You are so welcome

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frenetic-maker [2010-07-28 05:15:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I love the delicate shading-- it's like the scent of the rose petals wafting through the air...

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allison712 [2009-11-14 23:04:43 +0000 UTC]

You've been featured! [link]

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cyrano82 [2008-07-17 17:30:17 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful composition.
She looks a bit upset

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yaamas In reply to cyrano82 [2008-07-23 22:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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allison712 [2008-04-30 02:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations! This image has been featured in my news article Soft Pink Spring !

Thank you for sharing your beautiful work!

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The-Water-Nymph [2007-05-01 09:50:58 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!!!

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mmkn [2007-01-16 18:41:51 +0000 UTC]

stunning , high class piece . Dream world with great beautiful emotions.

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yaamas In reply to mmkn [2007-01-17 03:58:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Cream-fudge [2007-01-09 20:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Lovely, goregeous, just ahhhh beautiful

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yaamas In reply to Cream-fudge [2007-01-10 03:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it...thanks!

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CindeeRoo [2006-08-28 06:10:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh my...this is beautiful!

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yaamas In reply to CindeeRoo [2006-09-15 13:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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blue-iridescence [2006-04-22 15:50:32 +0000 UTC]

This work is so beautiful and touching, especially after reading the wonderful story you chose to accompany it. I'm absolutely amazed by the quality, especially of the skin and hair. The way you painted it makes her seem very soft and beautiful - marvelous.

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JoannaBromley [2006-01-26 01:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Super work, James!
Love the soft colour combination and I'm always amazed how you paint the texture of your character's hair. It looks so soft and natural. that's something I find difficult to achieve with watercolours... Once again...lovely work!

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yaamas In reply to JoannaBromley [2006-02-03 17:08:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Joanna I love your work too and all it's tiny little details!

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irish-echos-images [2006-01-18 11:29:48 +0000 UTC]

Beyond compare! Your work would fill Warrwick Globe or Arthur Rackham with Awe! Bravo!

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JupiterLily [2005-04-23 17:37:21 +0000 UTC]

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rodica [2005-01-26 17:02:41 +0000 UTC]

It's so beautiful I can almost smell the roses !

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MJWilliam [2005-01-25 01:43:21 +0000 UTC]

How did I manage to miss this one? It's gorgeous! Such a contemplative feel to it.

BTW, what paper do you usually work on?

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dalli1 [2004-12-18 18:14:53 +0000 UTC]

What a beauty!

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peaceoflorien [2004-12-06 00:19:11 +0000 UTC]

The expression, the complexity... This is one of my favorite paintings, ever. Can I ask you something? Do you use referece photos for your art?

wonderful piece.

Jenny

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brionius [2004-12-02 18:50:46 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome, I like the use of color in it

gallery: [link]

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Taiia [2004-12-01 13:00:50 +0000 UTC]

Of one my favourite pieces from your gallery . I love the calm and dreamy expression. Neatly chosen soft and rich colour palette makes the work even more moody .

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NanVanDenBoom [2004-11-30 17:35:04 +0000 UTC]

I can't help thinking of you as a lovely pretty person,because of your very sweet and colourfull imagination.

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Clouded-Mind [2004-11-29 04:13:08 +0000 UTC]

I love your work. How long does it usually take you to finish a piece and do you use models for your people?

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NancyvandenBoom [2004-11-27 23:00:52 +0000 UTC]

It is just perfect in every way!

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Phoenix-Dream-Angel [2004-11-25 15:58:55 +0000 UTC]

VERY BEAUTIFUL!

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Thelma1 [2004-11-25 03:27:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, this is just SOOO very beautiful, I love it

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trinket [2004-11-24 21:21:57 +0000 UTC]

beatiful, I love way she's posed, it really has an effect on the whole picture, a sort of romantic look.
I like the colors a lot, the pink is nice. The petals drifting around give this a dreamy effect, and the faeries are really nicely done as well.

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TwistedGenie [2004-11-24 17:46:56 +0000 UTC]

There is a peacefullness and sense of acceptance in her that truely shines through.....WoW u r good at what you do aren't ya? What is your medium by the way?

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yaamas In reply to TwistedGenie [2004-11-28 00:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Watercolor is my medium.

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TwistedGenie In reply to yaamas [2004-11-29 18:14:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks........after peekin' around more I clued in....(HELLO...is there anybody home????) I should have known but it has been awhile scince I have seen it used the 'right' way.........my medium is watercolor as-well but I can't seem to paint as free an easy with it as you, and I haven't been in the art world for awhile... LOL Your paintings are making me want to try the traditional style again......dunna no-e if I can paint so free and flowin'.....

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Larkitten [2004-11-24 16:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Extremely beautiful!

My goodness! How long does it take to finish up one of your works?

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yaamas In reply to Larkitten [2004-11-28 00:51:50 +0000 UTC]

It depends on the painting. This one took about 15 hrs.

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cice [2004-11-24 15:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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ambisweetiepie [2004-11-24 15:43:46 +0000 UTC]

ahhh!!! You need to open a prints account! some cheap and affordable way for me to buy your stuff... *checks around a bit* ahhh so you sell it on your site................... *still wants you to have a devART prints account* it's for convenience!

this picture's just awesome... each and every one of the rose petals... and even keeping the rose motif on her dress. it's just beautiful

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NaIniE [2004-11-24 13:19:52 +0000 UTC]

Lovely Work
I'm glad to see you here...

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Liloirendil [2004-11-24 05:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Its so beautiful, the details of the clothing and the fairies is wonderful, and I love the rose petals. Wonderful work

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ElwynEllessar [2004-11-24 03:08:57 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful!!

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Beebi [2004-11-24 02:41:02 +0000 UTC]

i love this picture. it reminds me of my grandmother, Rosie.

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Timaeus [2004-11-24 02:18:02 +0000 UTC]

Once again such gorgeous watercolour painting. ^^ You really expressed the theme of love in your piece very well, with the roses and fairies and the girl's pose. ^^ I really love the flow of the petals blowing upwards. Very nice composition and unity throughout your artwork!

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physcobabble [2004-11-24 01:56:37 +0000 UTC]

omg these r so awsome do u mind if i like ever just print them out i'm 2 poor 2 buy prints or anything:'-(

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Endelva [2004-11-24 00:23:57 +0000 UTC]

Trully romantic and beautiful.

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JIris [2004-11-24 00:14:27 +0000 UTC]

What charm!!!! What feeling of color!!!! Very much it is pleasant to me!!!! Your works are so magnificent!!!

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Ashelion [2004-11-24 00:13:06 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful

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LessaSenshi [2004-11-24 00:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, I especially love your comments about the picture. It's very imaginative and lovable as well as eye-catching. Great colors, I really like her hair though...

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CaroleHumphreys [2004-11-24 00:01:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is so lovely ... Do you realise that you've got a second gallery going here where I've added so much of your work to my favs? lol!

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