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TrueHorseLover165 [2011-12-13 05:31:02 +0000 UTC]

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I love the shading and feel to this pieace. The hair is perfect for a clydie however it ends at the start of the muzzle, I don't know if its normal or not because my clydies face is full of hair.... Anyway .. this critique isnt the best but I gave it a try but now I must try and give some imput.... normaly on a clydie the have small blacky brown patches around the muzzle and just a few more comments.... The flow of the foelock is beautiful like the winds blowing the forelock around. I also noticed there is no hair around the top area of the cheek. I hope I didn't offend you or give you any wrong information! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="38" height="15" alt="" title="Hug"/>

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to TrueHorseLover165 [2011-12-14 03:27:38 +0000 UTC]

no that was all wonderful crit. thank you so much! and yeah I'll have to keep working on this piece, but thank you so much for the input!

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TrueHorseLover165 In reply to xXMesmerizedXx [2011-12-16 07:30:44 +0000 UTC]

No probs Mes I went to see my clydie and found out the hair around top part of the check is ment to be short... lol

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to TrueHorseLover165 [2011-12-18 03:04:23 +0000 UTC]

oh wonderful thanks!

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TrueHorseLover165 In reply to xXMesmerizedXx [2011-12-18 06:57:40 +0000 UTC]

No Probs I love giving feedback

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Rachel-Toeppe [2011-12-11 21:57:32 +0000 UTC]

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I really like the hair. I think it flows very nice. It ends abruptly at the snout though, and its a little noticeable. What program did you use? For something like this, realism, I would use painter, not Photoshop. Thats me though. The eye could use a reflective white spot. The way it was drawn, it looks like the horse is distressed. I don't know if you wanted that or not. Otherwise, the brown portion of the snout is really nice e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Wink/Razz"/> I really like the texture that you added to it. The black hair has a nice flow to it also. The composition is in line with the rule of thirds, but the eye is really distracting and I think that it detracts the overall quality of the pic. Try to find another picture of a horse eye if the reference you had wasn't good. Thats my advice. Overall, it looks very nice and I hope you stick with the tools. This has a lot of potential, if you stick with it!

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to Rachel-Toeppe [2011-12-12 00:29:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to crit this. I did use photoshop to do this, what is painter and where can I find it? I do agree with the eye part, I struggle most with that >.< and yeah he's tossing his head up so I don't mind that he comes off as a bit distressed. And I will see what I can do to fix the abruptly ending hair too!

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Rachel-Toeppe In reply to xXMesmerizedXx [2011-12-13 00:16:56 +0000 UTC]

Painter is a corel tool. I bet that you could google it. I think I got mine as the education edition, much cheaper than the professional. Anyway, it is much easier to blend and make fine lines than photoshop, but that's my opinion. :3
anyway, good job.

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to Rachel-Toeppe [2011-12-13 03:04:21 +0000 UTC]

okay wonderful, thank you so much!

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Animal-Angels [2011-12-12 01:47:07 +0000 UTC]

I love the details on this! Beautiful!

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to Animal-Angels [2011-12-12 02:37:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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weezapony [2011-12-12 00:40:55 +0000 UTC]

FLUFFY. <3 Love it!

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to weezapony [2011-12-12 00:47:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!<3

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weezapony In reply to xXMesmerizedXx [2011-12-12 05:06:56 +0000 UTC]

No problem, that muzzle is just so great!

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to weezapony [2011-12-13 03:04:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you, it took me so long!

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Shylss [2011-12-12 00:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Looks so realistic !

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to Shylss [2011-12-12 00:25:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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Fillyfalls [2011-12-11 22:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Ahh so fluffy

Looks amazing ~

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to Fillyfalls [2011-12-12 00:26:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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Zephyrra [2011-12-11 22:14:12 +0000 UTC]

Woww, this is gorgeous!

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to Zephyrra [2011-12-12 00:25:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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HorseFreak194 [2011-12-11 22:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Amazing like always <3 keep up the great work

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to HorseFreak194 [2011-12-12 00:25:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you!<3

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TrueHorseLover165 [2011-12-11 21:53:52 +0000 UTC]

WOW This is amazing

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xXMesmerizedXx In reply to TrueHorseLover165 [2011-12-12 00:25:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!

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