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xxDaxelnaraxx — i'm already falling
Published: 2011-03-25 02:57:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 2218; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 36
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Description When he first saw her, he'd laughed; when she'd argue, he'd scoff.

But when she'd cry, he'd turn away,

Because he hurt.


And when he hurt, he felt father's hate.


                              You put your arms around me


When he challenged her, he'd jeer; when she fought, he retaliated

but only half-heartedly


                              and I believe that it's easier


And when she won, he collapsed; when she laughed, he sunk.

But when she offered her hand, he declined,

Because he needed it.



And when he needed, he knew father's neglect.



                                    for you to let me go


When he saw her, he'd scoff; when she followed, he yelled.

But when he bellowed, she whispered,

And he listened.


But when he listened, he heard a warmer voice


                             I hope that you see right through my walls


And when he heard, he'd float; before he knew it, he fell.

But when he did, he knew

it was her.


Father was nothing like her.


                                  I hope that you catch me


When he fell, she ran; when he felt her, she was there.

And as he shivered,

He knew.


Father's arms were never this warm


                                 because I'm already falling


When she walked, he ran; when she smiled, he laughed,

And he knew he'd never let go

Again.


He'd never let go again.


                              I'll never let a love get so close


But when she stood, he sat; when she waited, he hastened,

And when she angered, it burdened

His heart.


                                 You put your arms around me


It all replayed in his mind.

As she rose...

When he stood,

...she let go...

he never looked back,

...and he knew...

and not once did he say

...she was gone.

good-bye.

                                        and I'm home.
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Comments: 34

Ultimateleafeon [2012-10-08 03:12:30 +0000 UTC]

love it, this really touched leafeon's heart

but, the last part, and i'm serious, it almost made me cry, and i'm usually pretty adamant about stuff like this

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AnimeFreakCA [2012-09-26 11:43:31 +0000 UTC]

im just touched by this X3 so amazing

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Killriot1 [2012-07-03 22:27:50 +0000 UTC]

So sad!!!!!!!!!!!

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h3artstar [2011-06-10 00:04:33 +0000 UTC]

wow just wow, so touching and interesting form of writing,
it was wonderful to read,

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to h3artstar [2011-06-14 19:26:17 +0000 UTC]

aw thank you! hopefully i'll get back to writing soon, your comments have gotten me very motivated tee hee D

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h3artstar In reply to xxDaxelnaraxx [2011-06-14 21:57:24 +0000 UTC]

REALLY!
Thats is great to hear, I am glad i movitivated you some way :3

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to h3artstar [2011-06-14 23:03:44 +0000 UTC]

yes you did!

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h3artstar In reply to xxDaxelnaraxx [2011-06-14 23:13:44 +0000 UTC]

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secretagend [2011-04-27 09:25:28 +0000 UTC]

fuck u n tht u let her go away
simply fuck u

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ToxicSapphire [2011-04-11 04:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Its so sweet! <3
Beautifully written!

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to ToxicSapphire [2011-04-11 19:34:39 +0000 UTC]

d'oh thanks!!

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ToxicSapphire In reply to xxDaxelnaraxx [2011-04-11 22:45:57 +0000 UTC]

No problem!~

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RawrzTLK [2011-03-28 22:02:09 +0000 UTC]

TT_TT

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PandaNeko6 [2011-03-28 17:30:28 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to PandaNeko6 [2011-03-28 20:04:42 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU!!!! D

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EzzPeon [2011-03-25 14:21:10 +0000 UTC]

One word:

Beautiful.

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to EzzPeon [2011-03-25 19:14:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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LizHollow [2011-03-25 12:56:03 +0000 UTC]

So beautifully written! I love the repetitiveness of it. It has a really nice flow, and it kind of rings in your ears as you read. The game IS addicting, and this song IS good. Hehe. Great job!

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to LizHollow [2011-03-25 19:15:39 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks D Haven't read your critiques in a while lol!! I <3 your icon CHEREENNNNNNNN

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LizHollow In reply to xxDaxelnaraxx [2011-03-25 19:18:27 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it's been soooooo long! XD Thanks! I like your icon, too! N is so... sparkly! XD

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to LizHollow [2011-03-25 19:20:53 +0000 UTC]

haha isn't he?? I definitely need to catch up on some stories of yours! can NOT wait

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LizHollow In reply to xxDaxelnaraxx [2011-03-25 19:23:25 +0000 UTC]

Yes, and I think it suits him marvelously! XD Hehe, take your time! I hope you enjoy them!

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to LizHollow [2011-03-25 21:25:32 +0000 UTC]

will do!

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Soffie101 [2011-03-25 11:30:53 +0000 UTC]

That's so beautiful... ;A; I swear I cried at the end... I hate that ending how he leaves. DX But you put it in words that make it so great... Good job~

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to Soffie101 [2011-03-25 19:15:57 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks a lot glad you liked it

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RandomArtistWannabe [2011-03-25 03:41:36 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful (:

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to RandomArtistWannabe [2011-03-25 19:21:08 +0000 UTC]

thank youuu!

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VertigoZero [2011-03-25 03:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Aww. This is like the only writing thing that's ever really caught my attention. I loves it. :3

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to VertigoZero [2011-03-25 19:21:29 +0000 UTC]

wow, thank you! glad you loves it :3

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CalicoWingedCat [2011-03-25 03:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Great work.

I love the song Arms by Christina Perri! XD. I heard her premiere it on the radio morning show I listen too. It isa beautiful piece, and this is great work. I love it.

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to CalicoWingedCat [2011-03-25 19:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And I know, it's so bittersweet, but it's wonderful

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CalicoWingedCat In reply to xxDaxelnaraxx [2011-03-25 19:28:53 +0000 UTC]

It is! And again, very nice on the writing.

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xxDaxelnaraxx In reply to CalicoWingedCat [2011-03-25 21:25:24 +0000 UTC]

and thank you again C:

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CalicoWingedCat In reply to xxDaxelnaraxx [2011-03-25 21:26:56 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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