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XxCrystalBallerxX β€” Crystal Relavations
Published: 2005-10-11 00:33:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 134; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description The acid rain falls onto the world
Burning and pillaging what we didn’t earn
We abuse and we kill with no regrets or sorrow
Clouding our world in black smog in a later tomorrow
The diamonds are cutting through crystal revelations
People just want to be the ultimate domination
The razor sharp edge of science at it’s best
Destroys human thinking with human reason no less
We read what is right and lock it in mind
Thumbing our pages mindlessly through time
You think through writing knowledge is trusted
But all and all the sense of writing is rusted
With the carbon monoxide of brainwashing goons
Counting the hours until the next blue moon
To when people understand what this poem is about
But sooner or later everything falls out
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Comments: 9

naruto-hellscream [2005-10-17 21:49:47 +0000 UTC]

very cool...

niceperspective on the world at present affecting the world of tommorow (and some deeper stuff)
faved

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XxCrystalBallerxX In reply to naruto-hellscream [2005-10-22 20:30:40 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks kid.
yeah i love doing these types of poems.

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firesorceresschaotic [2005-10-13 02:02:18 +0000 UTC]

Very true. The wording and meter is great.

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XxCrystalBallerxX In reply to firesorceresschaotic [2005-10-22 20:26:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks
sorry for the taking forever to reply.

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firesorceresschaotic In reply to XxCrystalBallerxX [2005-10-23 05:44:10 +0000 UTC]

That's ok.

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akaneth [2005-10-11 20:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I love this one. So true..

Awesome! ^^

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XxCrystalBallerxX In reply to akaneth [2005-10-22 20:26:00 +0000 UTC]

wow sorry it took forever to reply. thanks hun

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akaneth In reply to XxCrystalBallerxX [2005-10-22 23:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Yer welcome. ^^

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Kaltros [2005-10-11 04:45:15 +0000 UTC]

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XxCrystalBallerxX In reply to Kaltros [2005-10-11 14:08:47 +0000 UTC]

yes it is poisonous but i was aiming at if you take out carbon monoxide and replaced it with poison
With the poison of brainwashing goons - it's basically saying that they're poisonous and can brainwash you. or something of the like. gaah i'm so bad at explaining.

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