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Published: 2016-09-29 22:12:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 265; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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Description This is Betta, SerpentEternal 's OC. I'm sorry this took so long, I had lots of catch up work to do for school, but I finally got it done.

Art (c) Me
Betta (c) SerpentEternal
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Comments: 8

FluffyKyubey42 [2016-10-12 19:00:46 +0000 UTC]

I really like the design of this dragon and how colorful he is! You did a great job with making all the colors blend together. My only advice would be to make more of a contrast between his head and the background since they're both pretty dark in color. Other than that, great job!

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xtb2002 In reply to FluffyKyubey42 [2016-10-12 19:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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FluffyKyubey42 In reply to xtb2002 [2016-10-12 19:05:06 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome!

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Caro-Chipher [2016-10-12 13:02:15 +0000 UTC]

So let´s see if I can help you
I chose this drawing beacuse I think the dragon is realy cute! I like how colorfull it is! It seems to me that the she is looking at me and sais someting like: Come on my back I will fly you to the sky. She looks realy simple but that´s great in it´s own way. So let´s look at the line work: I have to say the lines look like you had a realy shaky hand. Mabe you could have made them cleaner? And on some areas the line is not finished. I like the look of the dragon even thoug he´s not realy detailed. The little patterns on this head look realy cute like his eye! The moth also looks great! But the wing in the back seems wrong to me. I never drew a dragon but I think it should look diffrent, not just a straight line. Like I said it´s realy colorfull but maybe you could have added some shading. It would look more 3 dimensional. I also thik you could have blended the colors on the backround more. It looks like clouds or water. All together I realy like this dragon. It´s cute and has a great head shape. Maybe you could search for some tutorials for drawing dragon wings or something.
I hope I could help you.

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xtb2002 In reply to Caro-Chipher [2016-10-12 17:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your feedback! For future reference, the "wing" is actually a dorsal fin. As for the shaky lines, it is something I'm working on, but thank you for pointing it out!

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ArchNemesys [2016-09-30 00:45:01 +0000 UTC]

I love him so much he's awesome!! :3

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xtb2002 In reply to ArchNemesys [2016-09-30 00:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like him, again, sorry it took so long!

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ArchNemesys In reply to xtb2002 [2016-09-30 20:26:38 +0000 UTC]

ah it's fine

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