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xOSugArKisS09 — Kalila Commission
Published: 2009-09-21 00:26:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 747; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Here's my latest commission forThis is his OC Kalila! Check out his stories - they're such great pieces of literature! The stories are a lot of fun to read, so GO READ EM hehe
Hope he likes it & hope you all like it too!
Character (c) =animefreak2345
Art by me
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Alrighty, first like I said, thank you very much for giving me the shoutout, and enjoying my work! I really appreciate that e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
And...I like how this came out. It fits her, she's supposed to be a fairly small, but tsundere girl. Like I said, the smile seems a little too friendly for her, but that's ok, from the sounds of things you had a bit of trouble figuring out her expression. No biggie though...
I also like the way you drew her form. I know I'm not a good judge on anatomy, but you made her shape fairly realistic, and it fits her e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
I like her hair too, it's simple, but effective, and gets the job done very well e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
All in all, I don't really have any complaints, at all! Very nice job, and I can't wait to see more!
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Thanks so much for everything! I just want to make you happy
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You're very welcome! You had good timing too, I've been busy all week, so I haven't been able to do too much on here, so I mananged to crit both Kalila pictures, one yesterday and one today!
Also, do I get the high res?
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Haha I don't know how, but I'm very good with timing in a lot of ways .. it's weird. Thankies again 
Yeah I will definitely get that sent to you. I didn't know if you wanted one, but definitely look for it soon
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You're definitely improving!
Keep on working hard! You can be great one day, just never give up! Do gesture drawings from life and from posemaniacs, and just... well, draw from photos and from life a lot.
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Awww thank you so much! 
I've been tryin to do that a lot.. It kinda turns out weird sometimes though. I need to work on proportions and perspective a lot. Thanks for the help & thanks so much for commenting! **by the way we still need to go into a paint chat (i forgot the website). I've been so busy lately!
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Very nice work you did here. Your client must be happy to get such great works from you
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Thank you
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Wow, this looks great! I like the hair and fingers, and how you did the shading/wrinkles on the dress. My only qualm(You knew it was coming) is the that the eyes look too far apart. The background looks pretty good as well!
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Thank you!!
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ahaha, totally know whatcha mean there. I usually try to correct any mistakes i may have when i ink a drawing.
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Yea.. just sometimes that doesn't work - kinda sucks. & the think is, is that I leave the eyes to color til basically last.
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Thanks for the shout out! I really appreciate that
As for her, this turned out very good, it fits her very well. There's something about her smile that's almost a little too sweet, but that's alright
I'll write you a critique soon!
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You're very welcome - I wouldn't say it if I didn't mean it (I know I'm still getting through the stories, but they're very well done)
Thanks so much! I was going to do a different style mouth for the emotion, but it just didn't work out. Glad you like it though
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Very beautiful!I liked of her colors and the background
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