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orangejive [2011-04-30 01:29:38 +0000 UTC]

If you want some help:

-the arms seem awkward because 1. they are more boldly lined than everything else, making them seem a bit stiff and 2. the right arm should be more foreshortened, mostly by shortening the forearm and the bracelet on it should be more visible on the underside than it is.

-the head is a little large

-the bum is basically non-existent. It could be a fabric wrinkles problem for the cheek of the left leg, but there should be a bit more of an outward curve for the left leg (the main problem there)

-the foot of the left leg is a nicely-drawn back-of-arched-foot, however that would mean that her foot is basically turned in at a 90 degree angle, since the rest of her posture is on a side view.

I hope this helps some and sorry in advance for the bad wording. :>

PS: I really like the wing design and the way you did the hair is interesting.

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