azngamefreak [2005-11-20 00:11:17 +0000 UTC]
The shading is remarkable, but what is see is that the head, hands and face is out of proportions.
The hair on the scalp is correct, but when drawing the ponytail its a little lopsided. The fingers are suppose to face
forward, not 90 degree turn. The eyes are somewhat well drawn, but the pupils are incorrect. You drew them facing forward not
facing to the right. The ears aren't draw big enough, and you put to much detail into them ( which is alright ), the left ear is missing and the earring is not drawn in, and the sword is drawn correctly, but the position of the light is to small and to much to the left.
I hope I helped out somehow. =] overall, this is a good drawing. Watch out for the details.
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xmyxheartx In reply to azngamefreak [2005-11-20 02:40:43 +0000 UTC]
Heh, well I'm no expert >.> I saw this on the cover of one of my newtype's and just drew it. I think trying to compliment Sugisaki Sensei's style is what really threw me off somwhat. But thank you! I appreciate it very much.
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azngamefreak In reply to xmyxheartx [2005-11-20 05:56:24 +0000 UTC]
I know, I have the newtype issue, so I took the magazine and compared it against your drawing.
I'm no expert as well. And your very welcome. =]
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