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Published: 2008-06-26 04:34:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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You can take a picture of the damage,or you can create so much more.
Load the camera (or the gun)...
I'm the only thing that's keeping you together.
(You're tearing me apart.)
I am your sickness;
I am the faulty break line.
I am what keeps you from rest.
(You can have the last word.)
Don't you say a bad word of my name;
I could ruin yours weeks ago.
I hope you find out that your life is a lie.
Darling, you deserve to know.
I'm sure you know there is time for changing,
but now's the time to let go.
Every minute you spend is wasted,
and now it's starting to show.
I haunt your hallways;
I'm the noises you can't explain.
I'm the only reason you breathe.
(Without me, you are nothing.)
Just to correct some words
and patch things up,
On the seventh day,
God created me.
(There were misunderstandings.)
I've noticed you haven't been
talking all your nonsense.
I guess I finally won.
(I even had the last word.)
You know I'm onto you
and your every move.
Still, I don't obsess over you.
I've got much better things to do.
I'm sure you know there is time for changing,
but now's the time to let go.
Every minute you spend is wasted,
and now it's starting to show.
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Comments: 3
I think this is amazing. In the way that only metaphors and commas can deliver. =]
It reminds me of someone I used to know. In a way, the ong is almost home-y to me, in that way you feel at home when your getting revenge but no one will ever know it was you. Haha.
Peace, -Dakotah
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not bad so far. Although, it's hard for me to just sorta hear it sung in my head...I guess why I don't write music.
I tried once. I failed. Miserably. Art and I don't get along too well.
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Ha. You probably shouldn't be able to hear songs sung without knowing them. Otherwise, I'd think you were just outside my window. <.<
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