Comments: 20
MIDNIGHTsong [2011-04-05 00:43:51 +0000 UTC]
The dialogue is pretty realistic. Good work on that part. Would you mind a little constructive criticism? From one writer to another.
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KeraRaven [2010-06-15 01:37:37 +0000 UTC]
Awwww. now i wana read more^^
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WRITERandPOET In reply to KeraRaven [2010-06-15 12:46:22 +0000 UTC]
the rest is in my gallery but it's kinda far back cause it's the first story i wrote
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littletoushiro [2010-02-27 04:19:14 +0000 UTC]
wow...21 views in 1 day
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littletoushiro In reply to WRITERandPOET [2010-03-01 22:57:13 +0000 UTC]
don't I know that....u could it in your sleep probably
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