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magpaii [2017-01-22 08:09:19 +0000 UTC]

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Overall, this drawing is so good!! I really like it <33 I'll start by saying what works really well in this piece:
- the eyes are really beautiful! The mixing of the colours and the reflection make it look very realistic yet still keeping the style of the character.
- The glow around the fire add warmth to the atmosphere of the picture, which i assume you'd probably like in the drawing with fire ^^
- The wind is consistent! Well done, this is quite hard to get right! The scarf, fire, feathers and the tail(?) both look like wind is moving them to the right. It looks very good c:
- The anatomy is very good! And so is your beautiful style <33

Here's what I think you could improve on:
- The fire looks kind of out of place in a way, like how everything else has lines and the fire's kind of like scribbled in?? It could work in this style maybe try blending it a little bit
- The shading is kinda strange, maybe try make a warmer and lighter colour around the side of the character close to fire, as fire is a light source. Then make the other side of the character darker and darker in the areas the light of the fire wouldn't get to (for example behind the front legs) Try looking at some shading tutourials ^^ They really help!!
- There's only one thing I can find to comment on about the anatomy, the neck is a bit long, but other than that it's brilliant!

I hope this critique helps!! I love your art <3

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keiikko [2017-01-22 01:44:09 +0000 UTC]

ehh- i tried writing the critique where i was suppose to go... but it wouldn't let me submit it ;;

anyway i am just gonna put it in this comment- sorry  (it said i was 97 word short- i am pretty sure that's not right ;u; )


Ahh- this is so cute!

A little thing you might want to change is the back right leg- you might want to make it facing towards the fire. Also if you want to fix the lighting- Tint everything with a little red and shade everything where the light from the fire might not be hitting darker. and maybe make your oc looking at the fire.

 if that makes any scene

i hope this helped

but other than those three things- i think it looks great! The art is really pretty- and the fire looks really nice! <3

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