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Description Apple b's..HAHA Apple Black Poster...lol i wanted a poster where the food they eat could give an idea on who they are. symon is so mysterious so we don't see what he's having because he still checking the menu...lol

Characters from left to right, Sano, Lily, Neon, Ryuzaki, Symon, Osamu.

Art by Me
Characters by Me

PURCHASE APPLE BLACK VOLUME ONE [PAPERBACK VERSION]:
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Comments: 138

tora-no-ai [2012-08-10 04:37:47 +0000 UTC]

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the art work its self is brilliant, the shading is in proportion, the way you drew the people in the anime scene all have their own personality's that that they also show in the food that each person chose...the person on the right, Saito does in fact look very serious and does not look like he fits in the group, the only thing i do not like about your picture is how the booth climbs up next to where Sano is sitting... but i do like how you drew the bowls and plates... (i just randomly did the stars...so dont wory your atr work was good)

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Kierran5 [2012-07-30 22:10:51 +0000 UTC]

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Like Sokkhue said, the shading and everything of that nature looks great. The highlights are well brought out as well and the colors are amazingly vibrant. I've seen you have Sano with a design on his arm before, almost like armor, but the one in this drawing has a rougher looking feel to it-i really like how it turned out.
I can see how he mentioned the table's perspective being a bit off, but i was wondering if it was from the character's pressing down on it. although it seems the wrong end would be leaning inwards.
I like how the food has been detailed-that is amazing to me(i hate drawing food)

Overall, it's a great piece. Look forward to seeing new stuff, and hope we both continue to improve in the coming years.

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Sokkhue [2012-07-28 12:34:14 +0000 UTC]

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This looks very good, Odunze. I'll try write a critique. Please ignore the stars, I'm not using them.

I just wanted to say how amazing this looks, it's so rich I could stare at it for hours. I like the idea of having them eating, it's fun and it turned out very well.

You captured all the characters, it's like you get to know them alot more by looking at this. The way they behave with the table sure tells a lot about their personalities.
My favorite is Ruyzaki in the back there. Just look at him lol.

What stuck me first is Sano, he looks much kinder here than I've used to see you draw him. But then I haven't seen that much of him, only the character description picture.
But I like him alot more in this picture, the look suit him. Looking forward to see what he is like in the final comic, as well as the rest of the cast.

Ok, I have to nitpick on something, or else this wouldn't count as a fair critique. It looks like the table is a bit out of perspective, but it's something minor.

Anyway, this looks fantastic. Easily one of your best. The colors very rich and detailed, and the shading is good. The characters looks fantastic. I could talk about this forever.

Keep up the good work!

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WhytManga In reply to Sokkhue [2012-07-28 13:50:48 +0000 UTC]

honestly i was afraid when i saw the stars..LOL..and anyone who sees it too will feel teh same..lol..nice critique and yh the table IS slanting a bit. well whats donte is done, i wish i could ctrl-Z..lol

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FeralManga [2017-01-01 21:47:01 +0000 UTC]

What is Neon doing?

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hansel-alexander [2016-07-10 21:18:52 +0000 UTC]

haha thats awesome^^

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ocoelho [2016-07-10 15:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

Awesome poster Odunze!

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DeadCobra [2016-07-10 10:50:14 +0000 UTC]

Really well

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Charpio-Nogo [2016-01-11 05:32:26 +0000 UTC]

cool , with great detail.

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VixenandIndigo [2015-11-09 03:59:35 +0000 UTC]

this is so cool, it's great to see you bring color into your work

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WhytManga In reply to VixenandIndigo [2015-11-09 05:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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VixenandIndigo In reply to WhytManga [2015-11-10 00:35:40 +0000 UTC]

when someone does a great job they should be complimented, NP

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Unoga-The-Unknown [2015-08-09 02:54:49 +0000 UTC]

Kolibonk; Dope for your insides! That is probably the best drink ad I've ever seen...

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Sniper0092 [2015-03-29 02:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Glad to see them outside of battle

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naviramdath [2014-03-11 17:57:45 +0000 UTC]

i watched some manga videos on youtube when someone was interviewing you over video chat and i heard your story and stuff and with your manga and stuff hope you make it big time your art is exquisite and i am planning on becoming a manga artist myself and making my own anime but i still gotta work on alot of things and for sure i'd be a fan of your anime when it comes out  

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WhytManga In reply to naviramdath [2014-03-11 18:01:17 +0000 UTC]

lool..thank you very much!

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naviramdath In reply to WhytManga [2014-03-11 18:07:14 +0000 UTC]

your welcome, btw like say when you finish a manga on normal deleter pages do use a scanner to scan it into the computer and then upload it on the net?

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WhytManga In reply to naviramdath [2014-03-11 18:12:40 +0000 UTC]

yes.

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naviramdath In reply to WhytManga [2014-03-11 18:26:15 +0000 UTC]

ok cool, if you don't mind telling me what site can i go on to like upload my manga? like say i finished vol.1 and i wanna upload it on a manga site where other people can see it and stuff like that

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Jessso [2014-02-14 10:40:33 +0000 UTC]

Man, i love this, and even more so i love the fact that is done traditionally, it REALLY reminds me of the Japanese manga covers or meal scenes.  Greaat job . 

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FailGurl [2014-01-15 16:18:52 +0000 UTC]

I wish to draw just like you   

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TheBlackMangaArtist [2013-10-27 19:38:50 +0000 UTC]

Do you use your laptop's flat mouse to color on mangastudio?

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WhytManga In reply to TheBlackMangaArtist [2013-10-27 20:36:45 +0000 UTC]

i use a wacom tablet, but this was done traditionally.

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TheBlackMangaArtist In reply to WhytManga [2013-10-28 05:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok.Btw my brother read A.B. And said it was phenominal lol good work!

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WhytManga In reply to TheBlackMangaArtist [2013-10-28 05:16:06 +0000 UTC]

thnx!

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MoeMoney123 [2013-03-26 21:24:53 +0000 UTC]

lol apple bees.... you should have that restaurant in apple black

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WhytManga In reply to MoeMoney123 [2013-03-26 21:58:32 +0000 UTC]

theres a restaurant in apple black, it called "Orijoes", i just thought apple b's was a very appealing and relatable title..lol...look at the menu saito's holding..lol

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knucklesechidna43254 [2013-01-18 02:26:03 +0000 UTC]

when did you star drawing?

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dragonclaw95 [2013-01-02 02:42:24 +0000 UTC]

wow, looks so professional *^* can't wait to see ur art a year from now..damn that's going to be amazing x,D I love this drawing....the colors, and the characters seem awesome. I really wanna read your manga

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DARKNESSFALLS-SL [2012-11-27 12:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Hey man if your now busy with your manga apple black I wanted to have a draw off just one picture of any of your characters this isn't about who can draw better it's just about creativity which we both have if you want to do this then it has to be in markers lol my Wacom skills need partice but just let me now.. And again this is not to see who!s better because I needn't think anyone is better than anyone because we all are improving everyday for those who will get mad about this I'm sorry..

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itachi1deidara [2012-11-02 21:03:15 +0000 UTC]

I bet secretly behind that menu, Saito has a porno o///o

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WhytManga In reply to itachi1deidara [2012-11-02 22:49:55 +0000 UTC]

hahah

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gingerfly [2012-10-27 05:45:26 +0000 UTC]

heheh~ i like this a lot! it looks like it's been done in copic marker....it makes me wanna read your manga, so that's what i'm gonna do!!

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WhytManga In reply to gingerfly [2012-10-30 13:19:45 +0000 UTC]

THANX!

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anim3artist [2012-10-26 12:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Lol you got Apple Black at Apple Bees Creativity 150%

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Blazing0Pixel [2012-10-17 19:17:03 +0000 UTC]

Daamn that looks so awesome!!! It looks like a real published manga!! I'm really amazed! This is true inspiration right there!

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dami12324 [2012-10-11 22:17:34 +0000 UTC]

This is so awesome Dude I love your drawings[link]

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MustaYaki [2012-09-30 22:30:59 +0000 UTC]

Epic bro!

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WhytManga In reply to MustaYaki [2012-10-01 03:38:50 +0000 UTC]

thanxs man!

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LSYXzurironoa [2012-09-30 13:05:48 +0000 UTC]

SO COOL!

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davonbrooks [2012-09-16 00:19:41 +0000 UTC]

i always enjoy seeing someone working with copic markers.

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killerphoenix92 [2012-09-12 03:23:19 +0000 UTC]

AHH JUST CHILLIN´......EATIN!!
Nicely Done

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YouKnowManga [2012-08-28 12:17:29 +0000 UTC]

How did you color it??? Did you use Photoshop or did you use copic markers or something else????

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WhytManga In reply to YouKnowManga [2012-08-28 21:23:11 +0000 UTC]

copic markers.

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YouKnowManga In reply to YouKnowManga [2012-08-28 12:18:45 +0000 UTC]

never mind.... i just looked at the other comments..... lol

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SrGrafo [2012-08-23 21:28:34 +0000 UTC]

accepted

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MrPhilComics [2012-08-23 16:32:23 +0000 UTC]

wonderfull !

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lilyco101 [2012-08-23 01:00:36 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING!!

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EllieeChannX [2012-08-13 14:32:09 +0000 UTC]

what did you use to color this? its amazing!! good job (Y)

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WhytManga In reply to EllieeChannX [2012-08-13 17:27:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you and copic marker.

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