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Published: 2011-11-12 17:11:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 443; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Redesigned me old oc Sakura. Shes now an android with headphones //shotdead. She can fly and give off plasma which is what all her weapons are made of. Hope you like her
Sakura Nightstalker v 2.0 (c) *crystalicethorn
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Wow, Crystal! You can never stop improving, can you? This is amazing! It just blows me away! I love the markings and the background! Now you make me want to draw... OTL
So, first, I would like to point out the cons, as this is a critique, not a long compliment sheet.
First off, something about the hair is bothering me. I like the shading on it, and it's very smooth, but the thing is... it's very /big/. It's very thick hair, and I imagine cyborgs don't have too much hair. /shot I like your hairband, it stays true to the cyborg theme. The hair in the back is nice, but the shading on the back would be a bit more subdued, as the entirety of the head is shadowing it. The same goes for the pigtails.
Next, the ears seem a little big, and I know you tried to go robotic by putting lines on them, but in the end they look... bat-like? Otherwise, they're fine, but I would suggest more fur.
The tail is nice, and after a long time, I can realize that the pose of the figure is back-turned, or head over shoulder, but I would try to emphasize more of a turn, and the tail to be more... uh... under the... you know.
I kind of wish you had enlarged the picture as the figure is somewhat busy and the shading is complex. Either that, or made the background more compact and the picture in a bigger resolution. I would subdue the shading just a bit, as it's a little busy.
Overall, this is beautiful! Keep up the nice work!
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That its really fair! But the thing about the hair being to big is cos i play a video game with androids with HUGE hair i probably got it from that OTL And the ears are supposed to by on the biggish side :3
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I might livestream again
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i haz to go to bed D: its almost midnight OTL
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Aw, well, see you in the morning... 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
LOl its 4 pm here XD
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Some one stole Kyori!!!!
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this guy!! ~RainbowxNekox
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Please report her!!!
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Please try at least :3
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But I dunno how /shot
I mean, I will if I knew
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aww still, thanks for trying :3
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Whoops, I still need to critique this! Do you still want feedback on this piece, or do you want me to critique a newer one? ovo
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Sure
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ah, I see ^^ hope you can get your internet back(?) D:
it's 4:40am here, so I need to sleep, but I'll critique this when I wake up! xD
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One word, AWESOMEPPPPPPICTASTICAL!!!!! Ohmygosh! this is inspiration heaven here
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thanks
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Your welcome! Do you still have lots of commissions to do?
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ya but its rather slow at the moment
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Ohhh ok! I will wait because i want an adoptable of my new Oc! Twilen! :3
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