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Published: 2010-12-23 22:13:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Description Insanity is in your eyes,
Madness in your lips,
Desperateness in my heart,
A final, bloodied kiss.

Shrouded in scarlet-stained lace,
Our first and final dance,
Pachelbel's Canon,
A huntress's stance.

Saltier than the ocean,
Your blade on my skin,
We take my last breath,
In the trills of violin.

A cadaver of a friend,
A corpse of a lover,
Those wide hazel eyes
Could belong to no other.

Pianos strike the end,
Our moment is near,
We say nothing else,
Our passion is clear.
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Comments: 5

Captain-Degenerate [2010-12-24 06:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Ah, my love, 'tis exquisite. Perfect for us. You're so lovely. I love you. And the Canon in D? My favorite classical piece.

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why-hello In reply to Captain-Degenerate [2010-12-24 18:31:53 +0000 UTC]

I know. 'Tis our wedding march, no?
I'm so glad you like it~

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Captain-Degenerate In reply to why-hello [2010-12-25 04:11:05 +0000 UTC]

I love it, my dear. And yes, 'tis.

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Akhenaten-Aten [2010-12-23 22:16:53 +0000 UTC]

Our first final dance- I would put "and" in there.
Other than that it is beautiful!!!

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why-hello In reply to Akhenaten-Aten [2010-12-23 22:19:34 +0000 UTC]

I head your advice, love! Thanks for pointing it out.
I'm so glad you liked it enough to comment!

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