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Published: 2008-01-12 05:03:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 310; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 11
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Trying something a little different than usual!(It's Roxas, from Kingdom Hearts, by the way)
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I'm not usually (read:ever) one to comment on things, and I know this is about 12million years old (I don't check DA much), but I have to point out that this style is absolutely fantastic and you seem to be able to work with it very well.
If I continue to visit DA, I hope to (possibly) see more of this style in your work.
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Hey, thanks!
While you're in this rare mood of commenting on things, any tips? Helpful critique and all? I think I need a healthy dose of that.
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Alright.
Well, on the positive side, I really like the style of eyes you've chosen to work with. It's got a realism feel to it, while also retaining some element of personal style, which is important. Also, you've gotten the head shape down to a science, which is nice (and depressingly rare) to see.
The nose isn't bad, but the bridge bit of it stays a bit too wide the whole way through on this piece, it usually thins out a bit more closer to the top.
Also, the lines you put over his eyes (which i'm assuming are where his eyelids are, unless Roxas has some eye decora that i've missed all these years) are a bit high for the expression he's making. They'd be down a bit closer to his actual eyes.
I have to agree with one of the above posters though, you should definitely do a full body pose. It's a bit hard to give a good critique on a style from only one picture, so if you want me to crit anything else, I'm up for it, just send me it or w/e.
Also, just out of curiosity, how long have you been working in this style, orrrr was it just a one time/one picture thing?
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Also, holy shit that was long. Sorry for making you read all that O.O
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How come everybody can do noses 48092859859038 times better than I can >:0 I need to move past dot noses
I completely agree with superlative-girl on the hair thing :3
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I think Roxas would be a really sarcastic person. Doesn't he seem like he'd be a sarcastic person? You should try a full body picture next time!
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Yeah, I think he would be! Ooh, a full body picture? That's sure asking a lot!
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PPSSHHH. You're Kyla. You can do anything!
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You and your insane hair... That's really something else! You're creepily good at hair. And I really like the linework. ^_\/ Superlative.
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Thanks! Lol, what's with the 'superlative' thing?
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Hahaha... Superlative means a 'cut above the rest', or 'awesome'. That kind of stuff. ^_\/
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