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Published: 2004-07-24 17:32:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 866; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 81
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Today I buried a birdalong with it, we went as well
soil masking decomposition,
masking the real us
Burying wings, we are no more
Fall apart like the fragile bones of our reality
Surely, this bird will never soar
Song that held us from breaking
Will not be heard ever resounding
Fading we will become the earth, and be forgotten
eaten away by the parasites of time
Today I buried a bird
along with it, we went as well
(Brushes by Tippy.)
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this is a wonderful piece, poem and all very well put together....just wonderful.
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I love this!!!! IT'S SOOO COOL!!!! 
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Heh, awsome poem. Just like the kind I like to make--short, to the point, depressing, and rather morbid. I luv it for it being as lovely as the grave ^_^ Instant fav, keep up the good work!
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The watercolor is a nice nice affect to this pic, as is the variating sections of dark and light. The uneven hairdo adds to the uneven theme, with one wing with feathers and the other with out, one arm tucked away and the other down, one strap up and the other down, the slanting makeup, etc. The "mess" down at the ground is pleasant to look at, it isn't marring the picture or getting bested by the red watercolor. The way it's legs are buried into the ground fits the accompanying poem beautifully, especially with the half-buried and fully-composed bird sticking out of the ground. The soil really is masking the decomposition. 
Going along with the poem, I think the "we" mentioned is the person and the heart painted on the clothing, *shrugs* that's how I interpret it. I'm having trouble with the makeup though, hehe, it does do well along with the slanted and uneven theme, but how each streak is taking an opposite direction, it just irks me. I think it's that since this piece is so detailed my eyes look at the face and try to follow each line at the same time. LOL But besides that problem with my optic nerves, I reaaally like this one and wish I had seen it sooner 
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You are very good at this, I should ask your opinion on all my drawings before uploading them up to devart~ :3
Nnn, in my poem 'we' could also be the heart, because 'we' is really just describing burying the old self and present to let the new self be born. And I'm so glad that there was a visible connection with the poem and the drawing. ^o^
Nya~ I have a one track mind, so a lot of my drawings are influenced by tarou~ thank you again~ <3333~
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Uwaaa I finally have time, and am in a good enough mood, to bother with deviant art.
But, your welcome!! Aww, thank you~! Just poke me on aim and I'd be glad to, hehehe ^^! I really like your art <3
Ooh! I didn't think of it that way, but I like that view better. ^o^ They work so well together, I've never even owned an animal that died (they were all given away to other people before that could happen) and it makes me sad. And I take back what I said about the make up, it appeals to me alot more now. <333
Hehehe, same here! And your welcome, again~ <333
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Ehehe. X3X3 Yei~
Will, do. >3 Thanks!
Hehe. 
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i thought the drawing was a little elementary looking, but the more i stared there are a lot of subtle additions.
and the words really meant something.. but especially listening to sugizo's luna at the time..
this made me really sad, but thoughtful.
completely great.
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Thank you! This picture is very meaningful for me... so are the words that I wrote to go along, an image I've had in my mind for a long time now.
This was actually inspired from my dog who killed a bird, I gave it a proper funeral. :3
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i could kind of tell this was real for you, makes me think i shut put my floaty thoughts down finally.
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Yes yes, my old self and present self I buried away along with everything, I shut out a lot of poeple, I was quite naive and stupid back then but now... now it's time to start anew again. A new me.
I like to shut many things away. Now all I need to do is to delete them. :3
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Wow... that's frickin amazing... I wish I could draw XP
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Thank you so very much, and of course you can draw!
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Yup! All you need is dedication and lots of practice!~ It took me a very long time to be where I am today artistically. It's hard, but you get better with time and experience! So don't ever give up! Ah! hosting art sounds like a great idea, she must be happy.
Thank you again!
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Really? I try and draw things and I can't >< >< So I bribe my friend to draw them instead... just because it was a good idea... I wanna host some of her art on my website... they must be shared with the world ^_^
Your art is amazing ^^
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Yup! All you need is dedication and lots of practice!~ It took me a very long time to be where I am today artistically. It's hard, but you get better with time and experience! So don't ever give up! Ah! hosting art sounds like a great idea, she must be happy.
Thank you again!
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^_^ I try and improve my art style all the time. I can't find a way that suits me... I won't give up and try to improve. ^^ Thanks
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You're welcome! Don't ever give up~
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Thats really pretty. *_* It says alot to me... I think I may just have to add that too my favs.
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Thank you dearly, I put a lot of hidden meaning into some of my images, it's great that a lot can intrepret so much. I really appreciate your wonderful comment!
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wow. the words are beautiful.
i think you are one o the few who can make pencil and red look amazing. i love this, the whole aura about it. very beautiful.
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Thank you very much for your kind words!
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this is good Ari. so what are you going to do for the rest of summer?
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Thank you~
Japan, then going to the dentist, then getting my industrial...then working on my art... and.... making an appointment with AI. And applying for a job, so that I can work all the time and have some money for art school in october. Yeup.
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geez.... i just have is a clothing company( called Petticoat Dolls) and hot topic ( where i work) for the rest of the summer.... i figure i'll teach my self how to use the new sewing machines as well.... cause's they're parts are easier to find.. and the ones i know how to use are from the 1980's
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Yeup, once you graduate from high school, most think life is a breeze, sure... unless they plan for a no future type of life ahead of them. It gets even worse after high school. Less time, and more things to accomplish for yourself.
I know how to use sewing machines, my mum has one...I preffer hand sewing it's far more calming on the nerves.
That's great that you found a job, I hope to work at a petshop of some sort, or possibly the zoo. That would be wonderful. Ah, so you are designing your own clothes? That's wonderful for you, that reminds me of the time when I used to want to be a clothing designer. But apparently, I would soon run out of ideas in that feild. Though considering your fashion sense, you would be a nice asset in the feild... especially for the unique. Good luck with that. I'll be watching out for your designs in the near future.
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^.^ you have no idea how happy that makes me. I've always admired you...well in the last year that i've known you, but your comments on things have always ment alot to me. but yeah. i'll be sure to tell you when i start making stuff. i actually bought this cute lil sewing machine last night for $6 at big lots. i was so happy. i should design something for you and you can where it at AI and say it's by Petticoat dolls when people ask you. "the underground" it's so secret it's in RSM and laguna
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Aww! I'm glad that my words have had such an impact on you. Ah! That's great good luck with your new sewing machine. Ooo! That would be great! I would show off your lovely designs. :3
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^.^ * drawing out something for you right now* before skool starts you me and Serah should hang out again since i don't think we'll be seeing eachother til PMX
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That would be fun! but I'm going to be in Japan the rest of August. And September is my planning for college month. D:
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aw. well if you have a day off we should hang out
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You're such a fresking awesome artist, Ari!! Your mind just flows with ideas and concepts that I wish I could have thought of before you!
But her head is a little big for her body.
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Thank you for the nice comment~
And I thought no one would notice that the head was a bit large~ Haha! XD
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Those broken wings are fantastic ** I like the contrast of the bloody stains with the black and white picture.
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absolutely gorgeous ^^
i love the mediummmmmmmmm
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Thank you very much! :3
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This is really pretty! <3 I adore the drawing~
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