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Bueno ya casi termino este dibujito, solo falta de pintar a Vanish y Antauri y el fondo y quedara listo
Espero que les este gustando como va quedando
Nos vemos
No pienso repetirme con lo de quien es quien y los cumpleaños
Ah y pueden sugerirme ideas para el fondo XD
EDITED: Casi lo termino ahora nadamas va faltar buscarle un buen fondito XD, pero eso ya sera despues, la verdad no sabia de que color pintar las ropas XD
EDITED: TERMINADO
, no sabia que fondo ponerle , asi que espero que este bien XD , a Vanish le gustan las cosas brillantes Por orden de aparicion de izquierda a derecha son:
Eco 24 de Marzo (humano)
Erick 28 de Marzo (elfo)
Nicauri 15 de Marzo (dragon de fuego ardiente)
Elfish 28 de Marzo (elfo)
Yo misma (humana)
Karen Dennisse 22 de Marzo (hada)
Vanish 28 de Marzo (elfo)
Antauri 15 de Marzo (dragon de fuego oscuro)
Valente 28 de Marzo (elfo)
Alex ) 29 de Marzo. (humano)
Los cumpleaños por orden son:
Nicauri y Antauri (15 de Marzo)
Karen Dennisse (22 de Marzo)
Eco (24 de Marzo)
Vanish , Elfish , Valente , Erick , yo misma (28 de Marzo)
Alex (29 de Marzo)
Bueno fue un reto pero al final lo supere , creo que estoy mejorando y bueno ahora seguiran los ABRILEÑOS , eso si me da tiempo de hacerlos XD
No se que mas decir , espero que les guste este dibujo de mis personajes que cumplen en marzo y tambien yo que me dibuje <3
Fueron 10 personajes y mas de 100 capas usadas XD ... lo unico que esta hecho en Photoshop es el fondo , lo demas es puro SAI
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To help make it so you can tell they are all on the same level (same distance) but they are shorter or taller, make their body structure the same, like the heads vary in sizes, so especially to person on the far left, and far right, look like they are in the distance because their heads are smaller.
Also the one with the orange wings, dark red wings, glowing pendant and red cape and the one with black gloves and a blue tank top, they are all so big, not only in size, but body width, head size and more. Try and create a ballance ^^
Hope that helps a bit XP
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Ok I share the sketch [link]
Well you have the truth , I have problems with proportions not only with anatomy ...
mmm so I have problem with the size of the heads and hands ...
I have a lot problem to make balance, maybe because is the first time that I draw a 10 characters and with different sizes, was a challenge for me , but yeah I have to improve in that
Was helful, in this drawing the first characters that I draw are the character with orange wings and dark red wings because they are the tallest and the last ones were the smallest in the right and left side but when I drawing the others I have problem with that proportions and balance ...
Thankyou for your critique and suggestions and sorry if I not explain me well.
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What is your first language?
It isn't an easy thing to put that many people in a picture and I congraduate you on your bravery for doing so. I am not trying to attack you with bad things about your image, I am simply helping you to grow. I will see if I can do a quick tutorial for you if you'd like?
I dont know if I can/will/have time though.
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My first language is Spanish, but is good for me practice English because I need to improve for get better in TOEFL exam for my college that is a requirement to graduate me ... in the last time that I present the exam I get 510 and I need minimum 550.
But yes sometimes I have problem explaining me, but I try hard
Im not is not attack and sometimes wants more critiques or comments and my drawings, sometimes I ask for critique, especially when is a sketch so is more easy to correct before to color it ... but sometime I am afraid of critiques, but now I think I need them for improve, that the reason that I accept the transference and join me to this group ...
I really appreciate you that you a quick tutorial when you have time, if you don't have time now don't worry , I don't have time in this two week until may 14 I will free and have time XD
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Your English isn't bad at all :3 I'm actually going to get language helpers ^^ I already have one for spanish, I just need to ask them if they want to help out :3
Anyways, I'm glad you arn't offended or hurt. I wish you luck with the English exam ^^
And yes, critiques on sketches are good >D
I should upload my current sketch to be critiqued =O
aND YEAH, i WILL DO THE TUTORIAL IF i FIND TIME :3
Sorry! Capslock!
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is not bad , but in the exam are three parts , listening , grammar and reading ... the part in I am best is reading but the hardest is listening and sometimes grammar XDD, so I need to improve, and thanks for wish me luck in the English Exam ... if you have someone who writes in spanish and can help I appreciate that you tell them ...
I can't offend if the critique can help me to improve my artwork ...
Yes they are good and sketches because you can arrange the mistakes early ... I will waiting for you tutorial
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"Thanks for wishing me luck on my English Exam" is the correct way to say it :3
I believe *Deih can help you... they are spanish if I am correct.
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jaja you see , I need to study more XD , thank you for correct me and yes maybe he can help
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I correct you in the hopes of helping you ^^
And yes, hopefully they can help :3
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Hello.I`m a critique master from :devanime-training-group; I saw the note from the founder just now and I come here straight away.
Okay,now let`s start.
I like the character design of yours and their position is perfect.
But,there is a few things I would like to point out.
First thing of all is the human anatomy.I notice a few character have this kind of problem,like the guy with red shirt.His arm is not balance.The left arm is too short,if you did notice.
You have to work alot on the hand and feet.Here is a tutorial link,hopefully it help you [link]
Second is the size of the characters.Some of them are way too small,the characters at the side,they look like they are far away from the picture. Before you draw,I suggest you to scribble a few straight lines horizontally to fis their height and size.
Third is the face.Their chin is too sharp which makes the face look narrow,here is a turorial for you [link]
That`s all. I hope my critique is helpful.
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thank you for you critique
Im glad that you like the characters design and think the position is perfect
Yes I know I have problem with anatomy, especially with arms and legs , hands and feet so I appreciate that you give some help with this tutorials. And yes I with you, his left arm is short, I notice when finish the lineart but I didnt know how to change or something like that...
Yes is a problem with the size or proportions , I know that they look small , I try to balance the proportions but is difficult when some characters are 2 m and other are 1.50 m, I usually don't put height or weight in my character , but a few months when I create the dragons , I want to that they will be very tall ... so yes is a problem with that, I will try that you say, the lines...
I have plan to do a drawing with my tallest characters, and three of them are 3 m and the shortest is 1.70 m what would you recommend me in this case?
I know I need to work to with the face , not only with what you say but also I think in expressions
Your critique is helpful, I appreciate your critique
Thank you very much
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Well,I would recommend you to draw the lines to fix the height of the character. So when you are drawing,there is a line to remind you not to go over it.
You`re welcome.I`m glad it help.
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jaja si todos los meses hay cumpleaños
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jeje a mi no me convence del todo pero aun asi me gusta
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Te felicito esta muy lindo, es tremendo lo que has mejorado en muy poco tiempo!
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pues si creo que he mejorado mucho en este año aunque si me falta mejorar aun mas
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