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sorry If I put too much words on the speech bubbles......
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Ohhhh my i didnt understand some few things here...ummmm I think the explanations is like fitted into one page. I think i will suffer info overload. Maybe you should make the explanation shorter and simpler. xp
nice drawing here
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No prob I will have the time to check and read your manga carefully. it is just when it is so long. it is like an overload. it is like listening to a long speech at school. you can try hmmmm making a summary of it. try elaborating the details one by one that you want your character to say. Then put it all together^^ . I do this when i make essays sometimes.
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hmmm... I'll probably do that... thanks 4 the advice 
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nice ^^ good luck then ^^
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Yeah, it makes it really hard to read when it's mainly text.
It might be good to try and see if you can condense your explanation a bit.
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you're right ... maybe I'll have to put more panels to make it clearer next time... the words seem so few when I'm drawing it
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