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Published: 2011-11-19 17:51:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1045; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 15
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I've been in a huge Sailor Moon mode so I wanted to try to draw Black Lady (a.k.a evil chibiusa)This is my first try drawing her so she might not be completely accurate to her original design.
Critique is highly requested
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Oh hey it's USAGI under WISEMAN's influence. Oh YEAH. xD Gawd, I always loved this design. Anywayyys.
I love what you did with the hair. Seriously. It goes pretty well with the dark red background, too. They say pink and red is a big no-no, but I say SCREW THE RULES I HAVE MONEY (although... I spent it all on the christmas market... today...) ANYWAYS.
So, for the happy happy fun fun part: CRITIQUE~!
I'll say this right now; There are a lot of mistakes in this. I'm only talking about anatomy, though, your coloring is a-okay! XD
The legs look a bit wonky, but I think we've had this mentioned on a pervious image, no? You should work on that! As I said last time, real life studies are the best.
As for the upper body, it looks like the waist starts right underneith her breasts. I know I hated doing this, but I really advice you too look at images of nekid women. There should be anatomy art books or similar things in your library. ...That I've been to, btw. o.o I just realised that LOL. Anyways, nuff getting sidetracked. xD
Ah, and it's never really a good idea to make us see the face from straight ahead, but then turn the body away a little. At least tilt the head a bit to make it more natural, okay? Also, for a more natural effect, you should make the bangs a bit more... floaty, too. Not so straight and spiky. Because it doesn't look right when the rest of the hair (and clothes) are all floaty. XD D'you know what I mean?
The last thing I'd like to mention is the eyes. You should move the irises more towards the middle to avoid getting them to look squint-eyed. Okay?
And ahaha, I knooow that was a lot of negative stuff, but that's the first things I look for when I'm going to give critique to someone. Don't get offended or anything, please
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Oh my what a comment XD
Legs - Yeah I know I noticed it as soon as I uploaded it that her straight leg looks like it's bending Poor her, she must feel so uncomfortable XD
Upper body - Oh my, I didn't notice that! XD I do that a lot, thank you for pointing it out. Uuuh nekid women *innocent to the extreme*
Head - Gah! I did it AGAIN! XD I really neet to stop that huh XD
Bangs - Yeah, I wasn't really that happy with the bangs but I didn't know why. Thanks to you I do know now c':
Don't worry about it, I kinda do want to hear negative parts so that I know what I'm supposed to work on. Without negative comments you cannot improve c:
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Yes. It's quite a comment, indeed. *strokes imaginary beard wisely*
Isn't that terrible? You're SO HAPPY and then the next day: Oh SHIT so many mistakes! But it's too late to change! D:
Haha, yeah, I've noticed. I knooww, naked people are not fun to look at! But it has to be done, we have to suffer for the sake of our ART! ...At least you're not going to be forced to put up with croquis in artclass... OTL Still. DO EET.
Glad I could be of help! 8D
And, well, I wouldn't call it negative critique, since I write it to be helpful. I point out the wrongs I find, and suggest ways to correct it... So instead, it's helpful critique! 8D
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Som redan nämts så är benen lite off men OMFG det håret är GUDOMLIGT!
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Mjo, la märke till det DX
Nämen tackar, datorn krashade så jag fick göra om alla hårstrån igen >:C
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her legs seem a bit on the long side, but the hair is amazing!!! well done
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Yeah, I had huge problem and noticed the legs after posting it XD
Why thank you c:
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Ah well, always next time huh?
Again, hair is AWESOME!
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Oh yes indeed, without mistakes there's no learning c:
Thank you, I worked really hard with it c':
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Nämen man får tacka och bocka c':
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:3 Your welcome ^__^
Min snygga engelska/svenska x'D
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Thanbk you c':
My computer crashed so I had to redo the lines/hair strings sticking out of the lineart in her hair DX
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