Comments: 8
7SKULLROT [2018-06-27 16:59:05 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Pretty well done,I like it!
First off,the colour scheme is really pretty.I love how the pink and orange blend together so softly and smoothly too.
Her hair flows very smoothly and I like the movement in it.But when you put a big chunk over her eye,you can see the eye.Hair is not transparent,so I'd suggest either moving that or colouring it in solid.Even if you can't see the eye.Other than that the hair is nicely coloured,drawn and shaded...kinda reminds me of Yuzuki Yukari.
The line art is pretty smooth and flowing.Until you get to right leg.Kinda choppy.The variety in the lines is really nice,especially the smooth gradient all around the piece.
The face is pretty good.I'd maybe place the mask a little higher up on her face,so it's covering her nose and then make the nose look like it's underneath.The pupil on her eye is sideways and it looks a bit off.Other than that the eyes are well structured and drawn.
You really captured the "Pastel Gore" quite well,but it could use a few more spots of pastel blood on the background to make it really look like pastel gore.
The clothes and body are good in general,but I can't really see her arms.Unless she doesn't have any.Very well shaded with a clear light source.
To sum it all up
-The hair is great,but you shouldn't be able to see the eye underneath it
-The line art is great,but it's a little choppy on the her right leg.
-Well drawn face,but make the pupil look a little more natural and not slanted
-Make arms or lack of more clear to viewers
-Very well shaded
Pretty good drawing!
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DawnDrawingz [2018-06-27 16:16:08 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
I think the vision is good. I believe that you were trying to create an artwork featuring a prisoner while using pastel colors.
I love the originality of this artwork. In most artworks that have a darker focus (such as someone gagged), you see darker color palettes. Instead, you managed to use a bright, pastel color palette without taking away from the artwork.
The character is also well drawn, and I love your use of light to create shading and textures, so I think you did really well as far as technique.
This artwork does well in the impact section, as far as making you think. As I said in the paragraph about originality, prisoners or artworks with a darker theme tend to have darker colors, and cheerful, innocent artworks use pastels. So, you managed to have a darker focus and use pastel colors without taking away from the artwork.
You did really well on this artwork! Good job!
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C-r-u-m-p-l-e-d [2018-06-20 16:26:49 +0000 UTC]
She looks so cute! The color pallette looks so nice together as well~
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Vocaloidevil In reply to Dapperdeerstudios [2018-06-18 05:42:26 +0000 UTC]
Hhhh this is like one of the sweetest comment i've ever gotten thank you so much!
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Dapperdeerstudios In reply to Vocaloidevil [2018-06-18 05:44:49 +0000 UTC]
Well, it is true!
You're so welcome hun!
Please keep up the amazing work you do.
I would love to watch you and see more work from you.
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