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VividIllustrator — Ezra and Islim
Published: 2009-06-07 05:55:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1114; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Contest entry forLineart:
Color: Me
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Thank you. 
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No wonder I keep seeing you comment on other people's work, you're in the contest!
The way you colored this was very creative. And without altering the lineart much at all.
I think my favorite part is the forest before you reach the mountains.
For the underside of the dragon, did you paint it all red then coat it over with white?
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ooh i totally love the girl's skin tone and the overall colouring job
perhaps a different texture on the dragon would have made it better?
if not...try making the castle a bit more vivid to give the drawing that balanced look?
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Did you do that grass? o.O It looks so freaking awesome. I like testure on the rocks too and the castle.
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You have such amazing females and that dragon rocks.It's so colorful and beautiful. The only thing that jumps at me is the castle but I've been doing perspective for the last few weeks LOL. Great colors though awesome piece.
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Actually this lovely lineart is by the talented I just colored them
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Both parts were great.
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The castle's perspective is a little weird , i cant feel it also , her right leg looks a bit fatter than it should be , the last thing is the colors on the same leg , try to blend them more because i can see separate lines of them .
Over all , good work and good luck
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This isnt my lineart remember. But thank you for the skin tip! I focused so much on the dragon and background, the girl hasnt had much attention.
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Dont worry to much about it , it happens from time to time
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If you can, try blurring the lines of the castle to create that out of focus far away affect. It will help the depth ^^ Otherwise, I like the look and feel.
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Vivid ^____^ good job you tried to render each item differently noticed texture on walls, rocks, skin of girl, and leather of dragon.
I Think rendering surfaces to make them look what they are, is very important.
What I like best in this picture are the sword, looks worn out and has a flame aura very cool and the eye of the dragon looks spherical, rugged like a an eye from a fire breathing animal would look.
What I would work more on are the rocks in the foreground, smoothing them out and adding darker shadows to the crevices
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Thank you sweetie , your comments always mean alot to me
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you welcome ^____^ vivid 
o.o yus feel same way about backgrounds I keep avoiding them ._., but I'm sure all the practice you gained from this background will pay off in other works ^____^
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Love the rocks and background scenery, I really wanted to just do a background without the lineart, but since they didn't want to take out their lines I left 'em in there... also i'm not very good at BG's
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Thank you! Well I tried not to change any of his lines, but I deleted some minor lines such as the bushes. Im going to run it by him before I submit this officially.
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