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VISIONARYLEO — The Equestrian Eliminator

Published: 2013-11-11 23:47:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 3573; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 19
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Here's a super cool OC Pony I've helped to create base around the OC Pony JusSonic & I thought to use in his MLP: FIM Fanmake series. One who's appearance & origin can be nearly similar to the Winter Soldier from the Marvel Universe. And in truth, is Starlight Sparkle, but this character is is Alias persona since his memory & past were changed to become a soldier working for an evil Overlord King. His appearance has been at the second-near ending of Lorcan's Wrath & during the events in Road To The End story fanmakes. This character's form was made by me using Neros Urameshi's Pony Creator which is owned by [link]

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Agent of Grimmore: Unit Number 13, A.K.A. The Equestrian Eliminator

Appearance: He's seen as some young young unicorn stallion who's physically built, with very light cerulean coat, white & moderate colt blue mix short mane & tail colors, and and moderate purple color eyes. In depicting his age, he may be around the same age as Twilight Sparkle & her friends, only much taller & older looking. 

Attire: He wears a dark mask & a uniform with the symbol of Tartarus on his front. He wears a belt that has a gun on him that's hidden, wear's a dark olivish gray jacket vest, followed by his uniform of dark opal & black colors. The symbol of Tartarus is seen as a red/orange color sign on his uniform by his flank.

Personality: Meant to not feel much emotion, to become a assassin mercenary soldier. Able to use his intelligence, his strength, his speed, durability, offensive & defensive magic age & fighting skills are uncompared with personality traits to become a soldier of war. He's shown almost without any emotion, like a machine without feelings, loyal & qualify in his duty to be performed. (Much like the Winter Soldier from 'Avengers: Earth's Mightiest Heroes' TV Series) But as of recent events, some forms of stubbornness, hate, rage, even sadness in seeking the truth of his origin while in the mind he has no desire, but the heart does. These emotions, plus with some calm & collective points, will allow him better judgment in the future.

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Bio Background: He's very existence remains puzzled along with any of his early memories long before he was named Equestrian Eliamntor, but he is known as a loyal servant to his master within Tartarus, the Dark Elf called: Lord Grimmore "The Overlord King". Grimmore found him 'lying' around between life & death. And over the years, after being brought up, trained to be a mercenary soldier assassin within Tartarus, the Dark Elf made him into what Grimmore calls him....the "Most Deadliest Unicorn" on Equestria. It's been noted by secret, that Twilight Sparkle has herself to blame in what this stallion has become. Ever since Twilight & her friends & all of Equestria defeated the Scarred Ruler: Lorcan, he has hidden within the shadows, spying & reporting any information relating to what's happening to those in Tartarus that want the information. While he has spied on the ponies, his focus seems focus around Twilight Sparkle, as strange emotions seem to strive his duty, but pushes it aside. During Twilight taking only a few hand pick members to go into the End Of Equestria, he secretly followed them to watch over Twilight's progress & determine how much of her strength as an alicorn has come since being one & returning from her adventure with Sunset Shimmer & an encounter against the Superior. But after one event where he protected Twilight, & came in contact, an unknown motion happened when the word 'Starlight' of the mare's deceased younger brother, came into the picture. Another stranger event, was learning that when he touched Ben Mare's Master Sword, the Evilslayer to all evil creatures, did not hurt the agent...almost like it sense he was not 'truly' evil. During his moments in spying on Twilight's band, he's meant with a Mystic Pony that is trying to reach out to the other pony of the Equestrian Eliminator true self: as Starlight Sparkle, Twilight's decease younger brother who's body was never found after Lorcan believed to have killed him, but the agent of Grimmore had some doubts before beginning to ponder...a 'maybe' in his origin of being somepony before his current life & why he doesn't remember any before that. Even as he watched Twilight continue, he aided in secret against the Hydra that was not finished yet, wiping out the Labyrinth of Illusion's Fate with the wicked Guardian; Shadow Ghoul. He has seen Ben Mare fight Hiko Seijuro who even noticed his presence to almost slice him like he did a canyon's mountain area with a simple one hoof swing. The masked pony even secretly helped cast a protection shadow form spell to save Twilight from Peta's last attack at her and Nyx, while accruing Peta's seven Guardian Rings for him to be the master of their power. He has develop more of his old memories & will 'try' to break free of his will being controlled by Grimmore, but that deed will not be easy to accomplish, especially when the powerful Dark Elf has such a powerful hold on the poor soul. Near the end, Equestrian Elimantor witnesses the last feat of Twilight's group escaping the End of Equestria to make get home before all hope is lost, while he continues to be the agent of Grimmore still...

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SKILLS: He works from the shadows, as he was trained to become a shadow one opponent couldn't defeat, let alone a squad. Not even the Royal Guards of the Royal Sisters: Princess Celestia & Luna, coming at the Equestrian Eliminator at once could stop him. His strength is on a measure where not even the former Scarred Ruler, Lorcan, could beat him of his level of combative skills. 

*Magic Ability: "Shadow Magic": A very strange magic that entails the manipulation of shadows from both the user & others as a weapon arsenal along with techniques, that one would have to be very intelligent to pull off such stunts. The very basic of Shadow Magic involves controlling shadows to manipulate their form, even from objects around to living creatures. For such use of magic, one can even blend in with a shadow, travel by shadow and sneak up to anypony with such a silent approach, you never knew that they were there at all. The very context of how such magic works for those that can be so sneaky, you never know where it'll come from. The key note of Shadow Magic, is that it only stays active so long as the user is nearby or it's lifted by the caster.

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Shadow Magic Techniques:

-Shadow Lock: The shadows around of living creatures will glow purplish before they suddenly find their actions....locked; almost like they were statues, only alive.

-Shadow Imprisonment: When used against a target, they'll suddenly feel their body slipping into...its own shadow? And from the shadow will come glowing light-blue eyes while the shadow of the creature or target move to wonder, what happened to it? That they are trapped until the caster says when he'll let them out, trapping the victim in their own shadow to be left helpless. Only from the user's cast horn can undo the spell in letting the captive free from being place in it's shadow.

-Shadow Vanisher: From mentioning those very words, the Equestrian Eliminator's body will morph into a shadow, slip into the ground with the other shadows, and vanishes without a trace. Such a stealthy skill seems to explain how he's always sticking to shadows, for they allow him to slip away without a trace. Even when standing behind something that produces a shadow from the wall or ground, will be used as transport states to leave & head towards either a close or further area within the vicinity.

-Shadow Grasp: An invisible force to some if there are signs of the body being grasped tightly, but when looking on the ground, a line of shadow can be seen. The user that cast's the spell that launch a sneak attack in attacking & upholding a target without them being aware of what hit them.

-Shadow Claw: A strange shadowy large finger claw that can grasp lots of things no matter how many enemies or large boulders to drop them, toss them or crush the enemies in it's bind. This use is mostly to lift & grab heavy objects like paperweights to drop them around or move around with ease for one less of size & strength matter. Once the use is over, the shadow claw will shrink back down before disappearing within a shadow.

-Shadow Wall: A magical wall of shadow that emerges from the ground to protect user (and allies) from attacks while absorbing magical attacks. Once over or the user is done with it's use, the wall made of strangely solid matter of shadow, will evaporate downwards to sink into the ground until it is needed for protection use.

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Advance Offensive Shadow Techniques:

-Shadow Spear: A spear made of shadow magic. (Think of it like a Chaos Spear From Shadow The Hedgehog, the type Mephiles used in Sonic The Hedgehog 2006 game)

-Shadow Assault: A spell that which before an opponent can react, will soon see they are in the line of being surrounded by hovering forms of Shadow Spears by an almost unlimited number of them. Once performed, the technique will unleash a storm of Shadow Spears that maybe hardest to block or reflect. The worst part is when they stab a target all over from the spears that pin one's position, keeping any from trying to escape without feeling the intense pain.

-Shadow Obliteration: A very powerful magic spell, starts when glowing red lines begin forming from where the user stood. The lines will go in two split ways around the target to further sides of the area to create a circle. Once completed, a giant red line circle will be seen even for those above to notice, as the lines in the ground will glow even stronger like a force of concentrated power about to be unleashed. Once ready to be used by the caster, his eyes will glimmer of red before unleashing to deliver the fatal fury of the spell on the victim & everything else caught within. The far side corners to the mid line where the target is, will witness a dark margarita color rising up from the sides to almost close between where they stood. Once the lines seal shut in the form of a sphere of darkness with a shut mouth in trapping anything inside with crescent eyes still shut. The eye marks from above the sphere will open up, reacting to the moment. As the face will vanish, flashes of white line dash across the surface before it looks like an inferno contain inside about to explode. A large implosion of light will be seen, as the entire area will quake from the shock force to tremble even mountain canyons around to come tumbling down. Afterwards, what will be left is a huge crater showing smoldering redness in the ground. The spell technique performed, will completely disintegrate anything within the sphere of darkness. From large valley fields to a big mountain or a local city or village, all will be completely annihilated in the one spell. (This move was an inspired idea from what Velgemon in Digimon Frontier used called 'Dark Obliteration' could perform as such.)

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Equipment Gear:

*Magical Shadow Gun: The only weapon of physical appearance that can fire off powerful shadow projectiles of energy to implode & cause some form of physical harm. There are more then a few opponents that were defeated by a perform technique: "Final, 'The' Cannon", functions are fast draws of a tremendously powerful shot from his gun which is said to have almost godly speed. This weapon itself is when the Equestrian Eliminator sees he can't rely on magic alone to use this gun in his fights to win.

Magical Guardian Rings: Has seven powerful Guardians, three of which (Peryton, Remrace & Body Eye) are on loan to Mystic Tao's group, as long as he comes back to get the loan Guardians when need be.

*Guardian - Peryton: 

Ring Form: A magical ring that was that of diamond pieces to nearly be dots to line a real thing & one tiny piece in the center.

Appearance: A creature physically built, it's got dark blue/violet skin color, three silver color toe talons, a long skinny flat lizard tail with a scaly design line, long bulky arms with golden wrist bracelets, a gray-bronze waist belt seen around it's waist-line, two to three spiky stuff coming out of its back across left & right side like the appearance of wings while the center shows little spikes across the back line. From the head shows two long horns of a bull, each with a bracelet in the middle, light-turquoise on the right and golden on the left and its face appears monstrous of a white color with a wide mouth exposing it's sharp teeth and red-orange crimson eyes. And even on the edge wrist of the left horn and around it's left arm are turquoise color brace-bands. Truly this guy here was definitely looking like a monster foe that was both tough & powerful, not to mention scary, the Monstrous Form Guardian: Peryton.

Abilities: Can fly & has enormous strength, can fire a powerful ray from it's chest-plate.

*Guardian - Wakan Tanka:

Ring Form: A long golden cross pendant with some circle symbol chains around to the pendant as it began to glow.

Appearance: A giant form of a winged skeleton-bodied skull with glowing red eye dots and a bony tail. The wings showed a dark-blue feathery touch, the skull's forehead had on some bandanna with a lock on the ear portion with two large feathers & three dangle ear accessories, and it's top was a long blue flaming lock in which case, seem similar to a feather headdress hat by Indian folks, and this creature might have some connection to the style & appearance. Though embodying the "divine sacred", the summoning has minimized the 'Great Spirit's' omnipotence in this giant form, albeit retains some of its ascendancy. Truly if there was a creature of which some would fear as an evil spirit, look no further than the Limbo Serpent Skull Guardian: Wakan Tanka.

Abilities: Able to soar with flight, chomp it's foes with it's jaw mouth and breath off some powerful flames.

*Guardian - Eins:

Ring Form: A ring finger that was of an opal center with a diamond symbol, like a shield thing.

Appearance: A giant knightly armored creature with a dark gray opal shield and long spear, wore brown boots, tan brown pants & sleeve shirt, dark emerald and front gray waist guards with its upper gray armor covered by a puffy shaggy fur coat around the shoulder region and worn a bronze basket helmet with one hole for the left eye of tan dark blue color, three spikes from near the right forehead area and a red fluffy hair topping in a spiky-form. This guy, despite looking strange, is still a knight guardian, hence while he is the Armored Spear Knight: Eins.

Abilities: Able to fight in combat with it's spear & shield, has vast strength, and can speak english with an intellectual mind & personality.

*Guardian - Dead Dragon 

Ring Form: A bracelet chain of circle symbols with the last unconnected piece being a skull with a cross that was dangling from a circle ring by the skull's teeth.

Appearance: The form of a tyrannosaurus Rex, but had wings & two spike horns of a Dragon. It's scales looked a bit of dark & light emerald green color with some strange dark violet marks on the body that looked like…it was decaying. Yes, from its dark violet talon nail feet to its stretched long arms with four dark violet claw nails, two dark violet horns and it's wings looked like dark violet color, but they were decayed to the point this creature might not fly with holes in its wings. What the gang saw was the very sharp teeth of the creature and from orange-red mix color with a yellow pupil, it's like staring into the setting sun, but from the creature's mouth was a dark-green reeky breath color. This was an insentient Dragon breed that was seen with decaying skin and reeky breath, hence it's known as Guardian Zombie Beast: the Dead Dragon.

Abilities: Can actual fly high in the sky, spit out flaming fireballs that can set things on fire,

*Guardian - Remrace:

Ring Form: An arm bracelet with a strange center symbol of some creature's head and the bottom was a mouth.

Appearance: A giant size titan that looked like a humanoid entirely dark violet/black with bull-horns on its bald-head and a long flat tail, was very bulky, had only a diamond-square mark of red lines on its right shoulder while its blank eyes were red and inside it's pointy sharp teeth. From its big feet & large hands of five toes & fingers, it looked seriously muscular to bench-press….well, about anything. This was the insentient creature, the Dark Herculean Soul Guardian: Remrace, and if looks were frightful, this one could beat any in an instant.

Abilities: Display superhuman strength & power, somewhere near the Greek god of legends from the Mag'ne's world, the one called Hercules.

*Guardian - A Bao A Qu:

Ring Form: A gray bracelet with two pointy daggers near the center piece of a dark-gray skull with a long neck-beard shape.

Appearance: A skull with its lower jaw attached to a sharp, arched claw and where should be its cheeks two 3-piece claws. Its coloring was a mix of dark & gray of blue coloring while it's two eye-sockets had yellow eyeballs there. Then from sudden activation from being arisen, it's asteroid "jaw" and "cheekbone" cleave, from the 4 parts that separated to reveal a giant malicious eye of pink back coloring to its yellow eye color with the black pupil, appearing from some shroud of darkness. The ponies & dragons saw this creature, recalled a mystical monster of Malaysian legend. Thus was the creature of which its presence could scare any out of their minds, the Kamikaze Dark-Bringer Guardian: A Bao A Qu.

Abilities: By encapsulating targets and it explodes from the inside. This happens when a certain word "Burst Up!" is spoken, that the skull's yellow eyes glow, the imprisoned in the orb gets filled with tan-pink smoke, cracks form to spread before a large explosion happens that spreads across a field in releasing the imprisoned smoke cloud while the released captive falls out with signs of inflicted & bruises on the body.

*Guardian - Body Eye:

Ring Form: An opera necklace.

Appearance: A wingless Diablo with runic bonds sealing it's lower half, it looked like a black 3-eyed monster with a fourth eye on its breast (two normal eye locations were glowing red, the other odd spot eyes were yellow-orange eyeballs with red colors with a black opal center). This creature appeared to have been called forth upon the Earth as a depending doom to any that come across it: the Black Diablo Guardian: Body Eye.

Abilities: He however doesn't possess any satanic extraordinary; its power manifests in a myriad of bats while it itself wrecks massive destruction with its hands.

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Other information on this OC's progress will be updated when available. Until then, do enjoy this character & write reviews in what you think of it.

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DisneyEquestrian2012 [2015-11-03 05:30:19 +0000 UTC]

How many times do I have to say that Pony Creator is not mine?

Anyway, great work on this.

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