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vielleneonex — Breathe My Tears In

Published: 2006-12-10 16:16:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description One night so long,
A tear to whisper,
One moment to listen,
Yet mumbling heard only -
only by my weary shadow.

Affection and passion,
Bleeding and running away,
I can no longer feel this pain,
Now that you are here.

I wept and sighed,
But no time to cry,
I can't breathe,
Now that you are near.

A kiss so soft,,
That our minds met,
Meaningful and honest,
My hand held by love.

Our souls entwined,
Now I can't step aside,
I realise my one and only,
nothing else,
truly love.
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Comments: 6

Esqer [2006-12-11 17:02:22 +0000 UTC]

very nice
i really like it

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vielleneonex In reply to Esqer [2006-12-11 20:04:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
I felt really good compared to other poems I've written, although like I say in the artists comments, my mood varies within each poem.

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Minnimay [2006-12-11 10:31:21 +0000 UTC]

It's beautifull!!

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vielleneonex In reply to Minnimay [2006-12-11 16:15:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you!

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darkillusion009 [2006-12-10 22:06:23 +0000 UTC]

Once, again, I love the imagery in this. You are very talented! The short stories I write (which I will upload one day!) also usually carry an underlying theme. Sometimes it's love, but it's a specific kind of love (losing love, finding love, etc.)

^_^

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vielleneonex In reply to darkillusion009 [2006-12-10 22:15:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you so much ^________^
I love writing poetry, and I have many more to type up. So tomorrow, or on Tuesday, I will do so. (:
One day I hope to read your short stories =]

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