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Published: 2006-12-11 16:46:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 106; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description My palm of such teary skin,
Reaches the vein of your heart,
I trace the memories,
The steps between us,
But time won't move faster -
and it won't go back.

Why with such wonder and despair,
Do I look at these hands and think,
Time passes so slowly,
And the cherry blossoms,
Full of the wearers emotion -
become red with blood and your heartbeat.

I hold unto my living -
my soul which broke long ago,
What is this devotion -
what is this emotion,
Strolling through the ruins of the chambers.

The veins -
of the golden autumn leaves,
So clear and simple,
So why can't they show me,
Why won't they reveal -
you.

The one and only,
Teardrops from the ancient heart,
I feel something,
The palm of your hand against my cheek,
But... no more.

I plead, I cry, I nearly died -
I watched, I hit, my heart almost split,
I wrote, I smiled - but the true me - my inner self -
such a lonely child.

Now I walk into the empty alleyway,
Snow is falling,
Brushing against my weary cheeks,
I stopped -
a hand on my back,
I turned -
and now -
I'm in your arms and we form a bond,
No secrecy, no lies, I cried and cried -
I had no idea.
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Comments: 4

darkillusion009 [2006-12-12 21:12:28 +0000 UTC]

It's very good! It shows a range of emotions very well. I like it!

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vielleneonex In reply to darkillusion009 [2006-12-12 22:17:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
It was a poem from an old diary of mine. Well, I go through diaries quite quickly, so I guess you could say it was sort of recent.

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Esqer [2006-12-11 16:57:08 +0000 UTC]

wow
really good poem..
emotional..
it makes me feel sad.., or something..

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vielleneonex In reply to Esqer [2006-12-11 20:03:40 +0000 UTC]

I know, I was quite depressed when I wrote it ^^'
Thanks for the compliment!

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