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Vialir — Brokenstar and Jayfeather
Published: 2015-01-08 14:15:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 14795; Favourites: 467; Downloads: 28
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Scene from the book "The Last Hope", Erin Hunter:Relieved, Jayfeather welcomed back his blindness.
Then something flashed at the edge of his vision.
I’m not blind! I’m still dreaming!
Shapes moved around him. Trees towered on every side. Darkness clung to everything.
“You won’t see us coming,” a voice whispered in his ear.
Jayfeather jerked away. A pelt brushed against him from the other side. Terrified, he turned, trying to see who was there. But the shapes kept moving, too dark to make out.
A growl sounded behind him. “Your death will come slowly and painfully.”
Jayfeather spun around, straining his eyes into the trees.
“There is nothing you can do to prevent it.”
I know that voice! He tasted the air, the scent curling his tongue. He’d met this cat before, in the Dark Forest with Yellowfang. “Brokenstar?”
A shadow froze in front of him. Amber eyes gleamed from the darkness. Jayfeather jumped backward.
“Scared yet?” Brokenstar taunted.
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This was one of my favorite scenes. I'm glad he didn't hurt Jayfeather, I love Jayfeather.
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He was blind when he was alive after Yellowfang slashed his eyes and when he was dead he could see again. Say if a cats eyes, flanks and a shoulder and their hind legs were slashed they would feel weak, tired, in pain, and blind. If they were evil or goodor bad and if they were bad they would wake up in the dark forest (if good woke up in StarClan) the cat would feel normal and strong again and they would have their sight back. I'm Brokenstar, I'm blind because the medicine cat I exiled which is now ThunderClans Medicine cat slashed my eyes. I feel weak and tired. Sure Tigerclaw I'll get my rouges to help you attack the camp and so you can become leader afterwards. *coughs* what did you feed me? *coughs*
i fed you Deathberriers. I am your mother Brokentail.
thats impossible! I hissed.
*coughs again, this time blood*
i feel.... So.... Weak... Wha.. What's ..... Happ... Happening?
*final gasp*
*lies still*
opens eyes. Where am I? I can see again!
your in the Dark Forest.
see? That's what happens.
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This comment was posted on my birthday... May 27th.
LOL.
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omg well happy late B-day xD
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I really like this, even though i spoiled for me.. But idc 
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Yep. GOTTA SPOIL EVERYTHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGN!
*everything
coughs now i gotta go finish up my roblox castle
its not looking like a castle at all ;-;
im techsaur on roblox //cough cough
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SPOILZZZZZZZ *flips up into space* WHEE
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Spoilers, spoilers EVERYWHERE!
Look around you, SPOILERS! Don't you see them?
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LOVE YA BROKENSTAR!!!!!!!!! By the way the drawing is awesome
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"You won't see us coming" ......Well yeah, cause he's blind..
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Brokenstar is blind too
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..Yeah, I know. But he would obviously know when he and the Dark Forest will attack the Clans, Jayfeather won't so he can't "see" it coming.
Plus, my previous comment wasn't really a serious one, I was just pointing it out.
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I could see me yelling back at Brokenstar "He's blind you dumb ass bastard! Leave the awesome cat alone!"
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awesome anatomy while still showing expression!
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Raises brow. Uhm, Brokenstar, you didn't kill him, thank you.
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omg i love ur profile pic lolololol XD
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HOW COULD HAVE A BeETTER PROFILE PIC???
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I mean like theres no better profile pic in da world
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my is a wolfy with its tail over it and laying on a field with the sky
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I know but like...... I just realized it got changed... nevermind
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