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No preloader. No music. But it still contains over a megabyte of solid vector and programming information within its humble frame.Ladies and gentlemen. Behold. The behemoth in the womb.
This has been about 2 months on and off of work. The much anticipated sequel to the current leader of Newgrounds hentai dress-up is finally getting its second installment. While its predecessor was touted for its clean interface and accessibility, Pin-Ups 2 takes the interface to the extreme.
Comments appreciated. But dammit, CRITICISM IS A MUST. Criticize every damn thing you can think of. That's the point of a beta test. This is to show the current state of interface, layout, and such. There may be more mini-games, better graphics for some of the more "simplistic" options, but as for the core programming, this is it. The skeleton is in place, now it just needs the meat.
Get your crits in NOW. I need as many as I can get from all of you people. This is scheduled for a February 16 release. 2 days past Valentine's Day. Friday submissions are the most timely. I want this uploaded to Newgrounds on that day, and I want it to be as perfect as I can make it.
Thanks.
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Comments: 57
ahahahaahaa i earned 50 by clicking the website link. haha easy 50.
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I'd love to see more options for face and hair and skintone
the games for more keys is a cool idea, I did okay at all except the landing one.
clicking more art earns 50 bonus keys, but you don't get to use them browse it takes the active browser and uses it
the color boxes get cluttered on top of each other, it would be nice if opening one closed the previous
I think that covers it...
really cool stuff, glad I stumbled on your work
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and probably some skintones wouldn't hurt either
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Lol i wasted some of the time on the bounce
can you add a catgirl ears and tail again?
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okay waht are the numbers for next to the pussy, or shaved pussy i mean
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My english is not good enough to make a good critic
but u make me realize i'm just a Flash-newbie. Great work
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you gave it many parts with out any options like the arms or face
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Your kidding.
LOL, I just spent forever trying to get eoguh keys and The whole time I could've pressed delete. Very good game,
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even without the music, i love this game. the minigames would be addictive even as standalone games, but it's nice to get a reward for them. it definitely needs more options for hair, maybe a couple other girls, etc. though. i've seen entire games of this nature that have far less content and are nowhere near as fun to play, so it's amazing this is only a beta
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my favorite part is being able to play games to make points. easy winner
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well... The only problem i've noticed is the drawings and the few hairstyles... And what about varying the poses? And also put shoes, it would be better.
(I'd like to do the same with my drawings, maybe you could teach me how you did it)
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SMUT!
It reminds me of this volleyball game I sumbled onto once, and it promised me boobs if I could merely pass the first round. And you know what? I spent three days trying to beat that damn game. THREE DAYS! And I still couldnt beat it. Then I realised I could just type "boobs" into google and get the same results, so thats just what I did.
You won the battle, but not the war internets!
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i believe teh code for that game is getumout
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haa i thought i was the only one
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I played for like an hour then I noticed that the hand moves!
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I think a good add would be to put in things that she can have on, even when fully nude. The games are fun! I really enjoyed Lander, Juggler, and Bounce
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You forgot the other clothing parts - you left them BLAMK!
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Eh.......I meant "BLANK", not "BLAMK"
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I haven't played the original, so I can't really say how this one compares to that one.
But what I can say is that the mini-games are freaking cool! They are a great addition. And it kind of forces you to play it in order to unlock new clothing and even remove it.
The lander game isn't really too sensitive and it's very fun. But the landing field is a bit wide though.
I found that the mine sweeper game is a bit hard. But I tend to choose the mine at the start every time.
Some of the clothes doesn't overlap properly though and some of the colour selection screens open too far to the right.
But other than that, this was the first anime(hentai) dress-up game which I have actually played for more than 5 minutes. So that must mean it's pretty damn good!
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Lol, you sure it's not because you just minimized it and forgot it was there?
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Nope.
The scripting for the games are really well done by the way.
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the fade-ins are waay too slow, it makes the patient one impatient...
the former color window should go away when you select something new, cuz it gets all confuzzled...
and the color changer is the most confusing thing in all of man's inventions.. but I like the nudge
shifting the image around has no point it seems o_O
and..she's not that pretty...and...land me is haaaard
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Wow. That was pretty damn good! Nice work.
The good:
I really liked the interface (even in orange)
I like that there's a lot of stuff to do already.
The colour system was easy to use, and quite useful.
And the minigames were great fun.
Generally, it was a lot of fun to play.
The not so good:
(Obviously) it doesn't have everything yet.
The fade in / out is a little too slow.
When you click certain buttons, the little colour windows come up way too far off the right.
Overall, well done!
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Dude this is great!
The minesweepeer is preety simplistic, did you know it will repeat the same sets? You might also want to be able to flag squares without fliping them over with the right-mouse key.
Are their going to be more things for dressing, like more types/colors of hair, and articles for the other parts of the body that are higlighted?
One more thing, when you go searching through, I think, the outer tops, a large red square apears in the bottom-right hand courner.
You Rock!!
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Looks good, though that lander thing is a bit sensitive and the area where you can blow up is a little... wide. I smack into thin air and die. @_@
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I loved the original...but this one has so much more going for it...I actually kinda got into playing lander...which I'm no good at...and always end up getting mad. The only improvement would be to be able to change her pose...but I'd imagine that would tak some doing.
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Geez, you just have to go right for what has to be my least favorite request. Poses. I just want to throttle people and yell "do you know how much time I'm putting into THIS ONE POSE!?" But after cooling down, I then request a team of Korean animators on my team, and by then, they usually can it.
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lol...I was trying to find the only thing that would make it excell..and that was it. and as I was thinking about it I was realizing how hard that would be. Can you imagine if it was fully animated and changing poses as you were changing outfits...wow what a programming nightmare. You'd need a korean animation team for sure. But as it stands it is still a great piece of artwork.
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The mine sweeper game needs to be able to mark a square as a mine to prevent you clicking it. Other than that it's good.
The Lander game is fricken' hard.
The others are fine.
Also when you swap property sheets (eg: from chest to waist) the show buttons can un-synch. If you set something to "hide" change property sheets and change back, the item stays hidden but the hide/show button says hide. So you click it and nothing happens and it says "show". Click it AGAIN and the item shows. So some sort of property sheet initialization is needed on showPropertySheet.
The head could be prettier... has a funny shape.
All other judgements withheld due to missing art in beta release.
I like the idea of keys to unlock stuff. Don't make the games too easy or the reward isn't as good.
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Perhaps you could restrict it so that things have to be unlocked in order, with less rewarding unlocks first and underwear and bra hide the last 2 items to get.
That will make many sad horny players want to unlock everything and actually explore all the features.
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hey, nice art, a few suggestions:
when one window opens, close the rest automatically.
make their fades a little bit quicker.
have the option to turn off the 'outer' clothes...sometimes they're in the way of letting you see what the inner ones look like!
good luck!
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You can turn off the outer clothes... if you unlock it
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it was a little hard to believe you couldn't. well good luck!
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Although getting keys for playing for 10 minutes IS pretty sweet. :3
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On the Land Me game? I think it's a tad too sensitve; it crashes EVERY TIME.
On the hair options, there should be more than just two options; or at least make it so it doesn't stick on one; I can't change it back and forth between the short hair look and the first one that was up; it just stays short.
Also, when I change a color to just pure black, I can't move the slider back to white, although the color sliders still move.
Hope this helps, and that the "Land Me" thing isn't just me. ^__^()
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Critique you say...
1. Needs music. I'm not used to my computer being that quiet.
2. The minesweeper game is impossible. Maybe make it easier
3. A few more hairstyles would go a great ways towards improving it.
4.the arrows stick slightly. I had to double-click a few times.
Other than that it was pretty cool.
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You need to imporve the way the eyes look, they looked clean int hw original, and in this one, they look really, blobby and rough
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Well the hair change arrows appears to be trying to cycle through choices that aren't there - you have to click it several times to change between only two styles.
That's about the only thing that's not working properly yet is programed.
Most impressive so far.
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It's a great beta. I'll send you a note when I can sit at work and mess with this for 6 hours... Yeah, that;s right, play games at work where I get paid. It gets really slow at the business office.
I tried out the games mostly. I think the Sweeper one needs a lot of work. I'm a Minesweeper pro. So if you're to model it after minesweeper 
But this has a lot more interactivity than the last one, not to mention working for your skins.
The games are also not mind-numbingly simple.
The player paddle on the bounce game needs to be sped up just a tad cause when you really get those ricochet shots going, I haven't been able to move it fast enough to catch up with the ball.
Looking good as a beta. I'll try to give you more criticism when I spend more than 20 minutes on it. XD
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No, I replied to you because I was adding to your comment, and he will see it, so, yeah.
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About the paddle game, I thought on that too, if you make the paddle mouse contrlled, rather than button, it'd work better, then, make the computer a more complicated opponant to match the user, that'd make the game work as it is.
You should also try out for skill levels, where higher levels give you more keys, that way people with extreme skill aren't bored out of their mind playing with the easy versions of the games for keys to (since most of the people playing this will probably just end up doing so) see a naked collection of pixels.
Also, the quick Keys is good for the testing, but in the end version, I think you should take it out, that way people actually do some work and earn having everything unlocked, rather than loading it up, holding a button and clicking a couple times. If you don't take it out, just don't let it be so known that you can do it, or make it so they have to play so long before they can use it.
These are al just suggestions, no pressure and I'm not telling you what to do. Looking foward to seeing later versions. ^^
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Well it's good I'm not the only person who knows how to play minesweeper. I remember back at work, I'd show the kids how to do it, and it's like doing a magic trick.
However, try right-clicking in Flash. In fact, find me ONE Flash game in existence that uses a right click function. It doesn't exist. Hmm, what I could do is make it so you shift-click it, but there's no doubt people will screw that up.
OOH!
Click/drag flags!
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Click/drag flags would work. I actually didn't know Flash didn't have a right click application... weird.
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