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Hati is having fun with protecting the moon, I see.
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Someone is eating the moon...
GOSH DANG I LOVE THIS COMIC! XD it's to beautiful for words!
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I'm not the only one who sees that red dot next to the moon right?
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i honestly cant believe i havent found this comic till now. i love the story and i love the characters. its amazing ^-^
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I'm really late, but I saw that the first time I read Off-White, but I thought it was just my computer, then I read it again on another computer and it was still there... but then I read the rest of the story and I thought it was Hati. 'Cause that made sense so yeah!! XD
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i saw it too!
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Its actually hati i think.... the clouds sort of look like a wolf swallowing the moon or something.... that would be my guess.... but yeah it is red
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I can see Hati's red eye and face; his jaws are just above and below the moon.
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The way you do the sky is just so...so beautiful...
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*le gasp* Evil clouds with savage teeth and red star eye!!!!
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Now Iki is the one who is angry and can not sleep, because the others can not be quiet
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love the wolf eating the moon 
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just...wow.
This is absolutely beautiful. You're really talented.
Just...beautiful. It's all I can say right now
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Iki's expressions made me happy
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Am I the only one who can see a red star by the moon? OuO
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Oh Iki, why don't you see that scary cloud with the red eye? D:
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I know I already commented but I feel like I have to add something about that red star in panel 3
The idea you had is amazing!
But if I have to be frank, I had not noticed the shape the clouds formed. If I hadn't read the comment, I would have probably realized too late. Fact is, in my opinion, the red star is a little too bright. Sure, it stands out of the others stars (also because it's the only red one), but as I said before, it's kind of hypnotizing, and a little distracting, as I wasn't able to see the shape beneath it.
But then again, it may just be me, since it seems that all the other deviants managed to spot the cloud shape
My suggestion would be to turn the red star off a little. It would still be visible because it's the only red thing in the entire page, but it wouldn't look out of place this way
Other than that, I think this page is amazing and the idea of the cloud is brilliant!
I hope I helped you!
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Az mi sie ziewnelo przy przedostatnim kadrze 
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Aaw the next page xD;... Iki sees things it must be scary |D I wonder what it is!
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I don't like the way that cloud is looking at that moon D:
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XD I see a draaaaaaagon XD
Cool foreshadowing XD
And I freaking love Iki's face in the first panel
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"mysterious" red star is going to be significant in the future i feel it.
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I love the artwork on the first panel! The way the clouds are shaped as if a black wolf is going to engulf the moon. The red star as its' eye. A bit eerie really, but beautiful. Maybe its foreshadowing something?
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Lol whenever I see that red star I move to wipe it off my screen and then realize it's in the panel.
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You guys did really well on the fourth panel <3
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